Somewhere Across the Sea

You belong to him
Wanting you the way I do
Hurts me beautiful
Far, so very far away
Come closer, come close to me…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 9/22/2013 3:47:00 PM
beautiful write, Tim
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Date: 9/20/2013 6:13:00 PM
poignant yet beautiful poem...one can feel the sadness linger after the read...nicely penned!
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Date: 9/19/2013 12:09:00 PM
poignant with a hush so implictly suggested.. i like the chant-like feel of this, tim... very creatively rendered, sigh!.:) huggs
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Date: 9/18/2013 5:18:00 PM
You express so beautifully, what cannot be said aloud........but screams from the page.......... stinging, is the pain.
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Date: 9/18/2013 1:25:00 PM
Nicely pinned Tim, never set it free. No matter who's holding the dove. You seem a little down. I got your super duper soup mail. sending one right back at ya. tc. SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2013 6:22:00 AM
I know the feeling
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Date: 9/18/2013 3:39:00 AM
This poem speaks to me... I like Eileen's comment.....this is gorgeous. Lovely work.. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:41:00 AM
This tugs at the heart,Tim.....A romantic write....Beautiful
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Date: 9/17/2013 11:41:00 PM
I agree with my friend connie. A beauty of a poem!!
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Date: 9/17/2013 7:42:00 PM
A beautiful write from the romantic poet! I enjoyed it very much.
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