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Somewhere Across the Sea

You belong to him Wanting you the way I do Hurts me beautiful Far, so very far away Come closer, come close to me…

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/22/2013 3:47:00 PM

beautiful write, Tim

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/20/2013 6:13:00 PM

poignant yet beautiful poem...one can feel the sadness linger after the read...nicely penned!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2013 12:09:00 PM

poignant with a hush so implictly suggested.. i like the chant-like feel of this, tim... very creatively rendered, sigh!.:) huggs

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/18/2013 5:18:00 PM

You express so beautifully, what cannot be said aloud........but screams from the page.......... stinging, is the pain.

Skat A

Date: 9/18/2013 1:25:00 PM

Nicely pinned Tim, never set it free. No matter who's holding the dove. You seem a little down. I got your super duper soup mail. sending one right back at ya. tc. SKAT

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 9/18/2013 6:22:00 AM

I know the feeling

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/18/2013 3:39:00 AM

This poem speaks to me... I like Eileen's comment.....this is gorgeous. Lovely work.. Always, Laura

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/18/2013 2:41:00 AM

This tugs at the heart,Tim.....A romantic write....Beautiful

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/17/2013 11:41:00 PM

I agree with my friend connie. A beauty of a poem!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/17/2013 7:42:00 PM

A beautiful write from the romantic poet! I enjoyed it very much.