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Sometimes the Poem Should Cry

Setting off concealed landmines Lighting the night with mere lines Fall apart, come together, ring the chimes And weep in your poem sometimes Crash in ruin, sprout wings and fly Sweat bullets, be deligent, don't try Confess sins, deny and comply Yes, sometimes the poem should cry...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/10/2016 10:29:00 AM
ANOTHER fantastic one I had somehow missed from the past. what a blast from the past. Congrats.
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Date: 12/10/2016 9:33:00 AM
A poem can be as real as it gets! You brought a lot of emotion with yours! Congrats, Tim!
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Date: 12/10/2016 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations Tim :)
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Date: 2/3/2013 12:08:00 PM
I agree with you. Sometimes the poem should cry. What a fantastic write. Thanks for sharing and reading my poem. Lucilla
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Date: 2/2/2013 7:16:00 AM
Donna Jones is right. This is quite impressive.
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Date: 2/1/2013 12:50:00 PM
Very powerful and amazing words.
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Date: 2/1/2013 11:52:00 AM
This is a tremendous and wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What an astounding piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/1/2013 7:06:00 AM
What do l do at 4am when l can't sleep. . .yep, read poetry and cry (smile). I enjoyed this. I am going to give sleep another try. Nite.
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