'something Perfect'

Every doubt I give to you Every tear, No matter how often they come It is okay, you will wipe them all away The disappointments, That are so difficult to accept In the end, I live with them Knowing that today’s no Might be just a little step closer To your yes tomorrow Something better, Something perfect Just for me
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/10/2013 7:18:00 PM
I'm so glad God reads the messages in our tears, for I believe they come from the heart. I am enjoying reading your poetry this evening !! Your words are never hit and miss to me, home runs all the way and always from the heart ! I wish you love and peace and pray it be so !!
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Date: 11/26/2012 1:15:00 PM
With the tears this is so sad and beautiful. :*)
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Date: 11/26/2012 6:32:00 AM
Love the message Wilma, says so much to an open mind! Love, Lizzy
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Date: 11/25/2012 1:37:00 PM
As the Scribe says so nicely below, the trials of life make the overcoming as sweeter.. Just like the Poet who wrote this...hugs n luv Michael
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Date: 11/22/2012 7:31:00 AM
This is a really sweet poem here my friend! I quite enjoyed reading your delightful and wondrous write this morning! You know you might enjoy the Rengay form, you should try it out, just give it a whirl! You have so tenderly written a grandiose and such a marvelous poem I am in awe of its splendor! What a delight it has been to read! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/22/2012 7:16:00 AM
a touching poem by you Wilma.Love this.
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Date: 11/22/2012 7:15:00 AM
Yeahhh!
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