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A tender touch of your raw lips Warms my cooled blood. The gentle trace of your stern jaw By my graceful, broken touch. I navigate the icy sapphire below your darkened brow. Tempted, chained to you; There is no escape now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/17/2009 5:26:00 PM
This is an amazing poem! I think it's just perfect!!!!!!!! *Snakelady*
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Date: 9/17/2009 2:04:00 AM
Those doggone hormones just suck us in. Beautifully written expressing your passion. Sara
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Date: 4/5/2009 9:16:00 PM
How well you capture the concept of being a prisoner of love. Very passionate, yet tender poem, Heather!
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Date: 4/5/2009 5:08:00 PM
Love the sensuality and the texture. Great write.
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Date: 4/5/2009 3:35:00 PM
VERY EROTIC! I loved the warm feeling I got from reading this piece.
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Date: 4/5/2009 2:35:00 PM
What is more magnetic: the kiss, the poem, or the pantings of the heart ... I cannot see escape from either or all. Intelligently crafted write. Peace and love
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Date: 4/5/2009 12:48:00 PM
now that one tough lip lock. jhl
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