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Some Dreams Never Last

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Some Dreams Never Last

Softly the breeze flows through scented meadows
gentle sounds of water from the rivers
and haunting notes of music crescendos
in the distant background from the speakers

A cascading shower of climbing roses
she waits for her lover impatiently
over his lateness she agonizes
at last his footsteps coming hurriedly

he catches her up in his arms and spins
round and round until dizzy they both fall
her heart and emotions are now tailspins
she loves knowing it could lead to downfall

For to another one he is promised
yet he tells her that his heart belongs to her
she knows that he is a materialist
at first it had seemed a great adventure

Sighing she tells him that he must depart
his plans of her seduction now thwart

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  1. Date: 11/8/2013 8:23:00 AM
    Wow... Excellent piece of work....

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Oh the kill joy,, i was really into this, waiting for the explosive finish,,, but like the title suggests,, some dreams never last..,. your poetry just keeps getting better and better.....

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/24/2013 12:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I know Harry what can I say it suddenly took a twist lol. Ty for your very inspiring review Shadow x smile hugs
  1. Date: 10/24/2013 9:41:00 AM
    Good for her! He sounds like a dog.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 10/24/2013 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes he does Richard this took a life of its own lol Shadow x smile hugs