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Some Dreams Never Last

Softly the breeze flows through scented meadows gentle sounds of water from the rivers and haunting notes of music crescendos in the distant background from the speakers A cascading shower of climbing roses she waits for her lover impatiently over his lateness she agonizes at last his footsteps coming hurriedly he catches her up in his arms and spins round and round until dizzy they both fall her heart and emotions are now tailspins she loves knowing it could lead to downfall For to another one he is promised yet he tells her that his heart belongs to her she knows that he is a materialist at first it had seemed a great adventure Sighing she tells him that he must depart his plans of her seduction now thwart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/8/2013 8:23:00 AM
Wow... Excellent piece of work....
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Date: 10/24/2013 11:17:00 AM
Oh the kill joy,, i was really into this, waiting for the explosive finish,,, but like the title suggests,, some dreams never last..,. your poetry just keeps getting better and better.....
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/24/2013 12:06:00 PM
I know Harry what can I say it suddenly took a twist lol. Ty for your very inspiring review Shadow x smile hugs
Date: 10/24/2013 9:41:00 AM
Good for her! He sounds like a dog.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/24/2013 10:13:00 AM
yes he does Richard this took a life of its own lol Shadow x smile hugs

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