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Solitary Survivors

I walk along the streets as darkness falls Bundled deep within layers Of sweaters and scarves, hands deep within my pockets Smiling as the frigid air caresses my face. I breathe deeply, absorbing the scent of pine, Brusque air and dried leaves Mingled with the scent of logs Burning, escaping into the night. An owl in the distance hails the deepening dusk. The wind blows off the last of summers survivors. Turning up the collar of my weathered pea coat, I find myself gazing into the face of a full harvest moon. How I treasure these solitary walks. The peace of a gentle evening deep into fall. Crisp pine needles crunch beneath our feet, My dog Blue and I out for our daily evening jaunt. .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/6/2009 9:31:00 AM
Great writing here, Lena. You have a number posted that are "I don't know" under the Form but they are for the most part Free Verse ... smile ... how is your brother doing? Let me know through Soup Mail if you don't want to add a comment to a poem of mine ...
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Date: 7/25/2009 7:15:00 AM
The reader gets a true sense of "solitary survivors" in your descrition of walking through the dying leaves of fall as summer's warmth makes way for autumn's chill. Lovely write, Lena! Love, Carolyn
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