Solar Love

Every star is someone eles's son (shield your eyes) shrug off hate from everyone familiar place been here before thousands of nights the ocean shore coasts are changing minds align hate and fear must now resign connect the dots move my child tame the shy wake the wild shred advice relayed from the miser castrate cancer obstructing the wiser transcendental the hydrogen burns furnishing life each time earth turns

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/31/2011 5:07:00 PM

Hey, where have you been, my friend? I have not heard from you here in a while. I see you are still cranking out those fast marvelous poems of yours. A happy new year to you!

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/31/2011 10:32:00 AM

Lovely write JSL! I too love the short verse, this one shines with perfection! You seem to write this with ease, a real challenge this form is! I really enjoyed it, great work!!