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Soft Wind

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Soft Wind

Soft wind, warm and weightless 
That brushes my cheeks in cool of day
And on warm moonlit nights of summer 
Let me lay upon your expansive wings
Let me breathe deeply of your spirit
Carry me o’er God’s beautiful earth
Carry me across the turquoise seas
Where silence lies supreme as dolphins play 
Listen as their bodies slice the oceans deep 
As the sun seems to linger enjoying the view
Let me down for a whiles to walk bare feet upon warm sands
Let me frolic with gentle white crested waves, then
Carry me far beyond blue heaven’s dome
Carry me to my Fathers’ home


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  1. Date: 1/24/2011 4:46:00 AM
    A beautiful piece of writing here, very well done. Déirdre ó Maidin

  1. Date: 1/21/2011 6:22:00 PM
    Wow! Thankyou so much for referring me to your poem! The deapth of the words are amazing! Im looking forward to ready more of your poetry! Love Maree

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 12:54:00 PM
    smile -- first i would wish to say that this soft pastels portrait so sweet amid fragrant colours is absolutely beautiful dear as is, the beauty of yourself, and secondly i would also say that, yes, i could definitely see the heavenly angels joyfully carrying your precious soul to forevermores paradisic throne -- this is immaculate amid the breeze of beauty; a fave, just like you -- love, christopher

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 11:19:00 AM
    Hello Annalise, I traveled with you as I read. This is simply beautiful and a beautiful tribute to your faith. Lovely, just lovely As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 10:32:00 AM
    We will all make the journey to our Father's home one day, Annalise, and I hope it is as beautiful as you describe. I wanted to join you in soaring over the ocean and watching the dolphins play. A beautiful description of the "Soft Wind" that carries us home. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:45:00 AM
    the poem is too much and should go to my favorite.....

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 6:44:00 AM
    oh poetry, slay me slowly........ even a morosed man can be made lighten by this pen art. well done, for i am some one that can be hardly impressed. love, lightning ink.

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 5:55:00 AM
    To my favoites this one goes. This is ~~Magnificent~~ Annalise. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 5:25:00 AM
    Annalise you sketched quite a serene picture with your words.. Stunning write my friend.. Hope your week's been a good one, mine has been very busy.. love Wilma

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 2:34:00 PM
    Absolutly beautiful poetry.... period.... always Michael

  1. Date: 1/19/2011 1:20:00 PM
    What a soothing picture of bliss, a sanctuary you have pen- for a minute I enjoyed that breeze of soft wind,warm and weightless with this nice alliterative feelings, Annalise