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Soft Smiles and Sweet Kisses

Last fire before summer Come snuggle in close Lay your head on my lap While I play with your hair Tell me of how your day went Your hopes and your dreams While we ponder on forever And what life really means All my attention you have While the sagas you tell Crinkles around your eyes I know oh so well Tracing your lips with my fingers Your face with my hand I laugh with your stories And formulate a plan Keep talking my darling Your voice like a warm pot of molasses Soothingly flows through every part of me Sliding my hand in your shirt Resting my palm on your heart Feeling the beat and rhythm of your life My hand slides down your arm And the strength I find there Still makes me take notice Then my eyes meet your stare We pile the fire with wood Throw pillows on the floor Your whispers so tender Your lips to my ear Then spoon me close and hold me near Soft smiles and sweet kisses And forever reminisces

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Luke Steadman

Date: 4/22/2009 4:24:00 AM

first i would just like to say thanks for all your kind words on my poems! and secondly this poem is simply amazing and i know im just reiterating what everyone else has written here but the passion and your ability to put the reader with the story being told is just flawless…~Luke

John Rhinem

Date: 4/6/2009 10:57:00 AM

....and all else aside; this is one of the most beautiful writes of love that I have ever read!!!:):)~Classic, pure, romantic and sweet through and through~"Excellent & Perfect Dear Laurie!!!'":):)~"My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!":):) On we go....

John Rhinem

Date: 4/6/2009 10:50:00 AM

"Good Morning Dear & Lovely Laurie Ginn!!!:):)~I sincerely hope that life has been treating "You & Your Loves" absolutely wonderfully!!?:):)~You know I have viewed this amazing write of Yours a couple of times before....And everytime in which I do~It becomes so much more serene and precious~As I envision "You," and all of the tenderness that it evokes about "You" and what's truly inside of "Your Priceless Heart & Soul!!!:):)....cont....

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 4/3/2009 10:41:00 AM

Classic Laurie :)

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 4/3/2009 7:28:00 AM

Imagery fantastic-- simplicity is its strength a very good poem a very good write Gem my dear

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/2/2009 3:31:00 AM

Dear Laurie, What a absolutely Beautiful LOVE POEM This is why I wrote "If I Could" After reading "Soft Smiles and Sweet Kisses" maybe I too could write of LOVE YOU are and Inspiration Awesome from YOUR Heart POEM LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 4/1/2009 9:47:00 PM

I felt like I was watching one of those passionate Romantic novels..I mean this was deep Mz Lady :) So tender, gentle and very sweet...A pleasure to read as it makes me want to dream that for just one second, this could be my life...Oh how wonderful it would be...Well, I can't say you swept me off my feet, but you definitely knocked me out of my chair...LOL~WHoa- "I need some help here". "Got a little light headed"..I hope one day I experience moments like this..Awesome as ever, Huggs, Tyesha

Robin L. Gass

Date: 4/1/2009 7:32:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem, Laurie! A write of tender love and passon. Excellent work, my friend! Love, Robin

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2009 5:29:00 PM

A beautiful, romantic scene in this lovely poem, Laurie. Such a pleasant and uplifting read! Love, Carolyn

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/1/2009 5:29:00 PM

i love the story line in this write strong and passionate!

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/1/2009 2:48:00 PM

So sweetly passionate. We better get a fireplace in our next house or, well, or I will be missing out on moments like this. Sigh. Such a tender and loving write that seems to just flow and sweep the reader away into another world. One I want to be in right now! : ) Awesome poetry Ms. Laurie. Love, Shar

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/1/2009 12:53:00 PM

Wow...hot, hot, hot! This is very well written with some vivid imagery. Great love scene! So much love and passion. Smiles from Lolita

Arany P.

Date: 4/1/2009 9:21:00 AM

i love the scene... you sure create a mood for a day out! lovely write, Laurie ~ Arany

Ronald Bingham

Date: 4/1/2009 8:04:00 AM

Such a passionate poem as only you could present. It gives hope to all mankind, God Bless, Ron

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/1/2009 8:00:00 AM

Wow...Ms Ginn....you are gonna have guys knocking at your door...."let me snuggle with this sweet lady!!" That soothing voice of yours, soft touch of yours...the fire.....um, um, um....!!! (soup mail)

P Sheart

Date: 4/1/2009 7:36:00 AM

Hi Laurie Filled with incredible love, heart and soul! Just beautiful. Makes one want to fall in love all over again! Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/1/2009 7:36:00 AM

Wow...okay I am ready for some cuddling..LOL..this is beautiful Laurie...tracing lips...staring into eyes..fire..wood...this poem makes heat in the most sexy way.....I had no idea that a softness was under that tough exterior..LOL...loved it.