Soft Haze of June

Lying under the soft haze of June
An erotic light under heaven's full moon
Your face bright, exquisite site, I swoon

Soothing melodious notes frolic, our tune
Your hair, thick- I flick, clown, and strewn
To the beach we reach, dancing in the dune

World goes unnoticed, tornado, quake, monsoon
Nude we exude a lover's embrace, consummate spoon
As we sprawl, I recall, merging  till late afternoon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/23/2013 11:26:00 AM
Amy CONGRATS in Giorgio's awesome "Gothic or Romantic contest" enjoy your day.................... LOVE -- SKAT
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Date: 10/23/2013 7:50:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Amy
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Date: 10/22/2013 9:55:00 PM
Sweet win Amy...PD
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:33:00 AM
wow, what an amazing use of all those rhymes. Loved it, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/31/2010 5:50:00 PM
Oh my! What an intoxicating poem Amy. I loved it. Great job.
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Date: 5/31/2010 12:08:00 AM
very beautiful as well sensual,,a great monorhyme,,,congratulations on your win,,well deserved and Thank you for all the visits to mine and for leaving your words behind,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:01:00 AM
Delightful images Amy, wonderful poetry. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations Amy on a worthy poem, Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/28/2010 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this fun contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:47:00 AM
Congrats Amy on your winning poem in the Monorhyme contest with this amazing write as I read it previously it was touching then as now....enjoy your victory and have a wonderful holiday weekend... are u entering on P.P. for their money contest? John e mailed me yesterday..luv..Linda-Marie or aka "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:07:00 AM
Lovely thoughts and images in this romantic write, Amy. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/28/2010 2:34:00 AM
Well done Amy. this was an enjoyable read...cheers Margaret
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Date: 5/26/2010 8:34:00 PM
Nicely done monorhyme. Good luck.
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Date: 5/26/2010 6:38:00 PM
Cool one, Amy and some internal rhyme as well! Cute! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/26/2010 4:43:00 PM
My kinda poem Amy .. great one .. good luck in the contest.. my entry is "Temptation by Twilight"..need I say more? haha..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/26/2010 4:40:00 PM
A loving and playful poem. Great monorhyme. Really like it-- Awesome poem. Good luck! Love, Susan
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Date: 5/26/2010 4:07:00 PM
Good one Amy.....Good Luck.....Larry
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