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'Sober thoughts'

You know how I sometimes wish life would be easier then I realize with easy comes self reliance and we can’t depend on ourselves the air that we breathe comes from somewhere - a higher power that power decides whether we stop breathing or continue living so if your days feel like it’s getting tougher if you feel all your strength has deserted you it has not; you still have the ability to think you can still embrace what life offers you even if its heartache, tough times, difficult people somewhere out there someone would take all your difficult moments just to experience life in all its facets

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 12:35:00 PM
    loved it ^.^ amazing poem so far i'v read today (:

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 12:24:00 PM
    What you have written here is so true. It's when things get rough, that we must not quit. I love this. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 10:33:00 AM
    Truly, deeply well stated...excellent!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:54:00 PM
    It's lovely to see you back, Already at least three posts this past week of yours for me to view. all pearls of wisdom, Wilma.

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 8:09:00 PM
    How true Wilma, we have to take life as it comes and deal with all the finicky problems. Someone said that makes us wise. Maby stupid is not so ornery. Love you poem sweetie and hope all is well with you. :)

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 10:59:00 AM
    I see you're still wielding your golden pen, homegirl. What a gem. Thanks for this delightful read and pearls of wisdom. :)

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 12:03:00 PM
    So thought provoking !! Love it !!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Missing you, Wilma...just wanted to read your last post. Truly enjoyed this exceptional poem. I hope you're having a great weekend! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 4:33:00 AM
    wow Wilma, this is so good, really does start one thinking.. just love this, and your philosophy..

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Wilma I like the concept of space in this one, the air we breath we take for granted, hope you are well...David

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 7:04:00 AM
    I like your pushing of the broad picture, Wilma. Thanks for looking in on me. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:53:00 PM
    Very uplifting poem here By you Wilmaa.Love this!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 4:16:00 PM
    This one certainly came from the heart.<3 And is soooo true! With love and new view. :o) Love it! You got me in the heart.Gonna Fav it... Thanks for stopping by...I haven't seen you for a while? Was a little worried about you? :o)

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 1:48:00 PM
    Really strong messages coming through your thoughtful lines here Wilma well done indeed.."

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 12:33:00 PM
    This write reminds me to be happy and satisfied at where I am, that many people might not have the luxury or the gift of poetry in their lives! I am blesses in so many ways, I can do nothing but be happy of where I am, and your poem shows me this! I just want to share my events of life through my poems so others can see things as I do! This is a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 12:14:00 PM
    I like your style...a true talent

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 11:29:00 AM
    If life is hard some times it does not matter how much breeze comes from the higher powers ....... you "lose" the breath and "ground contact" .... read my "EARTHQUAKE" where I write a little bit about what I mean, Wilma. - Thank you for visiting my poem: "I tried to say" glad you liked it. - Happy to see you :) - Hope you are doing well. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 7:16:00 AM
    A very thought provoking moment here dear Wilma, your poetry has substance and beauty. Love you new avatar photo, keep me in prayer today, going in for a procedure, love you xxx