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So Sweet

So sweet The lonesomeness of the city light street has me hearing the sound of my heart beat, I quickly fall to sleep, I wake up and stand looking outside from my widow balcony. I see two homeless men standing in line whom I randomly see in this street, scuffling in their packets from a handouts, for good bite to eat as they gladly retrieve their treat which is a pleasant cite for flooded eyes to see moreover on the opposite side of the street, I see people set down enjoying a late morning sunny breeze in front of a restaurant chattering, bonding, eating and drinking as I share with them lessoning to the smooth sound of the music, children laughing and playing on the playground and on hard concrete street however not wanting to hear the havoc of the noise, and the rush of a saturated street. That is a part of life... which can be sound and can be so sweet. So Sweet Poetry 10/28/10 by Keith K. Relf

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Date: 9/17/2012 10:15:00 PM
Keith, what a lovely vignette for the mind and spirit! warm regards, x peace Ruby
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Keith Relf
Date: 9/25/2012 2:00:00 PM
thanks you
Date: 5/18/2012 5:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Keith. Love, Carol
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Keith Relf
Date: 5/18/2012 11:35:00 AM
thanks... most of my poems are not in full versions when i enter contest. so enjoy
Date: 5/2/2012 10:50:00 AM
Keith I like this a lot, why don't you have a go at my contest and get to know other poets, it's just fun, any questions just soup mail me, good luck..David
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Keith Relf
Date: 2/19/2022 5:38:00 AM
Your right

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