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So Sweet

 So sweet
  The lonesomeness of the city light street
 has me hearing the sound of my heart beat,
 I quickly fall to sleep, I wake up and stand
 looking outside from my widow balcony.
 I see two homeless men standing in line
 whom I randomly see in this street,
 scuffling in their packets from a handouts,
 for good bite to eat as they gladly retrieve their treat
 which is a pleasant cite for flooded eyes to see
 moreover on the opposite side of the street,
 I see people set down enjoying
 a late morning sunny breeze in front of a restaurant
 chattering, bonding, eating and drinking as 
 I share with them lessoning to the smooth sound
 of the music, children laughing and playing
 on the playground and on hard concrete street however
 not wanting to hear the havoc of the noise, 
 and the rush of a saturated street.
 That is a part of life... which can be sound and can be so sweet.


So Sweet Poetry 10/28/10 by Keith K. Relf

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  1. Date: 9/17/2012 10:15:00 PM
    Keith, what a lovely vignette for the mind and spirit! warm regards, x peace Ruby

    Relf Avatar Keith Relf
    Date: 9/25/2012 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks you
  1. Date: 5/18/2012 5:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Keith. Love, Carol

    Relf Avatar Keith Relf
    Date: 5/18/2012 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks... most of my poems are not in full versions when i enter contest. so enjoy
  1. Date: 5/2/2012 10:50:00 AM
    Keith I like this a lot, why don't you have a go at my contest and get to know other poets, it's just fun, any questions just soup mail me, good luck..David