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So lacking

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So lacking

Is the passion in my writing lost?
I feel like I should try harder.
Are the words as deep as they once were?
I feel as though something's missing.

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  1. Date: 11/4/2009 2:16:00 PM
    you are good, keep sharing with the soup. Loved reading your poems today.