Snowy Pathway

Path was covered over with freezing snow The beauty is astounding White and cold to the touch The trees hold a touch of this miracle Powdered on the soft branches It sure is breathtaking I walk down the still carpeted pathway The breeze picks up the snowflakes I breathe deeply this air Fresh air enters my cool chest that’s heaved high This landscape is inspiring One I can draw words out Pleasantly I walk towards my warm home Where my cocoa awaits me And a fire to enjoy
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 11/27/2012 2:24:00 PM
I just love this one, Russell - I love snow but it hardly ever snows here in Plymouth. Great way to finish it too with the comforting stanza
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Date: 11/26/2012 3:18:00 PM
I love the comfort this gives us, walking in that beauty and then warming up with the fire and the cocoa.
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Date: 11/25/2012 10:42:00 PM
Russell..I can feel the beauty through this icy land. Your verse is like the miracle running through the image...I have never though as winter.. a true beautiful soul 2 enjoy. ..love this...pd
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Date: 11/25/2012 10:42:00 PM
sounds cold your way, still hot right here, a sweating in my shorts, that's all, computer says oh dear:)
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Date: 11/25/2012 2:08:00 PM
well that season is upon on us this week with a chance of snow this Tues. night.. your work is inspirational to say the least.. michael
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Date: 11/25/2012 1:52:00 PM
Winter will be here soon enough. It hasn't arrived here yet. You made me wish it'll be here soon. Breathtaking write, Russell. Enjoyed.
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