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WONDERLAND OF SNOW

White powdery wisps

Instead of the morning dew...

Winter's Wonderland


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  SNOW ANGEL

Walking past the park

Wings made with childlike passion

Angelic Image


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   SNOW  SNOW  SNOW

Whitened droplets

Falling from gray clouds above

Catch one on your tongue


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       SNOW

White covers the ground

Trouble starting the blower

Shovel time...again


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   JACK FROST

Chilled air on glass

Panes painted with icy hues

Scenes from Jack's palette.

Copyright © Daniel Cwiak | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/25/2011 10:56:00 PM Danile, i remeber these haikus, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d. Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 12/5/2010 10:49:00 AM wonderful set of haikus , congrats on your win in the contest Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 12/3/2010 1:05:00 PM i like the cascading effect and wording of this, it accentuates the theme.Daniel Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/2/2010 4:08:00 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/2/2010 3:17:00 PM Congrat my friend...well deserved.... Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/2/2010 8:38:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in Skat's contest, Daniel Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 12/2/2010 8:25:00 AM Congratulations Daniel on your first place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 12/2/2010 7:52:00 AM This set is really lovely, I feel the cold, congrats on your win with these:) Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 12/2/2010 7:36:00 AM Great job, Daniel....a collection of fine wintery poems!! Congratulations! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/2/2010 7:23:00 AM Daniel) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d. Login to Reply

Joy Wellington Date: 12/2/2010 5:57:00 AM Excellent write, merits first place win, congrats Daniel. One love, Joy (Jew) Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/2/2010 5:00:00 AM congrats on your winning 1st position. with these wonderful poems, Harry Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 12/2/2010 4:23:00 AM OOh, I love this Dan!! Congratulations on your first place win in Irma's contest :) love Wilma Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/2/2010 3:54:00 AM Congratulations Dan On your 1st Place win in Irma's contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 12/1/2010 11:07:00 PM Well yoou covered this brilliantly. Congratulations on your no. 1 spot. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 12/1/2010 9:49:00 PM These sure are wonderful haiku, Dan!! Way to go on your awesome win with these! I also love the word play you did for your title-- way to go!! ^_^ -- nikko :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/1/2010 8:40:00 PM YEAAAA!!!! YOu got first place. Congratulations, Daniel, VERY well deserved. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/1/2010 8:33:00 PM Congrats Dan on your first place win in the Snow contest with this super write.. enjoy my friend with luv.. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/1/2010 7:57:00 PM Many congratulations, in my contest Daniel, loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2010 8:59:00 PM These are all really fun to read, DAniel. I am sure you will do in the contest. I have a question for you. Soupmail! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/29/2010 10:22:00 AM good imagery on all haiku's,, I really enjoyed the second one it was cute,, enjoyed reading Daniel,...p.d. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/29/2010 9:41:00 AM Brilliant use of descriptive imagery in all of these poems, Daniel! It was a joy to think of the snow blanket replacing the morning due, Jack Frost painting the world with winter colors and especially the children creating snow angels. You also gave me a laugh with the haku about "shovel time." Best wishes in the snow contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/29/2010 8:54:00 AM Wonderful set of Haikus Dan for the contest.. especially luv the Snow Angel as I collect Angels and they are dear to me.. part of the family ... good luck my friend with this lovely entry.. Login to Reply