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Snownsense

WONDERLAND OF SNOW White powdery wisps Instead of the morning dew... Winter's Wonderland * * * SNOW ANGEL Walking past the park Wings made with childlike passion Angelic Image * * * SNOW SNOW SNOW Whitened droplets Falling from gray clouds above Catch one on your tongue * * * SNOW White covers the ground Trouble starting the blower Shovel time...again * * * JACK FROST Chilled air on glass Panes painted with icy hues Scenes from Jack's palette.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 10:56:00 PM

Danile, i remeber these haikus, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/5/2010 10:49:00 AM

wonderful set of haikus , congrats on your win in the contest

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/3/2010 1:05:00 PM

i like the cascading effect and wording of this, it accentuates the theme.Daniel

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2010 4:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/2/2010 3:17:00 PM

Congrat my friend...well deserved....

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in Skat's contest, Daniel

John Freeman

Date: 12/2/2010 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations Daniel on your first place. Agape, Moses

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 7:52:00 AM

This set is really lovely, I feel the cold, congrats on your win with these:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2010 7:36:00 AM

Great job, Daniel....a collection of fine wintery poems!! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 7:23:00 AM

Daniel) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.

Joy Wellington

Date: 12/2/2010 5:57:00 AM

Excellent write, merits first place win, congrats Daniel. One love, Joy (Jew)

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/2/2010 5:00:00 AM

congrats on your winning 1st position. with these wonderful poems, Harry

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/2/2010 4:23:00 AM

OOh, I love this Dan!! Congratulations on your first place win in Irma's contest :) love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 3:54:00 AM

Congratulations Dan On your 1st Place win in Irma's contest. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/1/2010 11:07:00 PM

Well yoou covered this brilliantly. Congratulations on your no. 1 spot. Love, Joyce

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/1/2010 9:49:00 PM

These sure are wonderful haiku, Dan!! Way to go on your awesome win with these! I also love the word play you did for your title-- way to go!! ^_^ -- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2010 8:40:00 PM

YEAAAA!!!! YOu got first place. Congratulations, Daniel, VERY well deserved. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/1/2010 8:33:00 PM

Congrats Dan on your first place win in the Snow contest with this super write.. enjoy my friend with luv..

Skat A

Date: 12/1/2010 7:57:00 PM

Many congratulations, in my contest Daniel, loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2010 8:59:00 PM

These are all really fun to read, DAniel. I am sure you will do in the contest. I have a question for you. Soupmail!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2010 10:22:00 AM

good imagery on all haiku's,, I really enjoyed the second one it was cute,, enjoyed reading Daniel,...p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/29/2010 9:41:00 AM

Brilliant use of descriptive imagery in all of these poems, Daniel! It was a joy to think of the snow blanket replacing the morning due, Jack Frost painting the world with winter colors and especially the children creating snow angels. You also gave me a laugh with the haku about "shovel time." Best wishes in the snow contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/29/2010 8:54:00 AM

Wonderful set of Haikus Dan for the contest.. especially luv the Snow Angel as I collect Angels and they are dear to me.. part of the family ... good luck my friend with this lovely entry..