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Snowflakes

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Snowflakes

There are two similar snowflakes,
they`re dancing in the frosty air.
And childish joy them merry makes
in such a menacing and hostile era. 

Persecuted flocks the wind severe 
then will sweep impassively aside.
On the sly those naughty disappear, 
rest will come soon in the clear sky.

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  1. Date: 6/18/2010 3:10:00 AM
    Great expressive and descriptive language..I especially like the first two lines..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara

  1. Date: 2/24/2010 7:37:00 AM
    I enjoyed that, thanks

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 2:57:00 PM
    GLAD U DDNT GO OLEG!

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 7:38:00 PM
    much fun! Oleg! we get a bunch of snow here in Minnesota! too!...jim