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Snowflakes

There are two similar snowflakes, they`re dancing in the frosty air. And childish joy them merry makes in such a menacing and hostile era. Persecuted flocks the wind severe then will sweep impassively aside. On the sly those naughty disappear, rest will come soon in the clear sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/18/2010 3:10:00 AM
Great expressive and descriptive language..I especially like the first two lines..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 2/24/2010 7:37:00 AM
I enjoyed that, thanks
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Date: 9/19/2009 2:57:00 PM
GLAD U DDNT GO OLEG!
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Date: 9/9/2009 7:38:00 PM
much fun! Oleg! we get a bunch of snow here in Minnesota! too!...jim
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