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Snowflake

A fragile winter butterfly
Flutters from the sky
So soft and yet her heart
Is cold and made of ice
But if I warm it
She will melt and die

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Author:  Elaine George

Copyright © Elaine George

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  1. Date: 8/31/2014 6:03:00 PM
    I enjoyed this poem showing personification, but more so the underlying message of a heart that dies upon warmth and affection. Interesting poem all around. Thanks. Thomas

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 10:36:00 AM
    You words in poem are as delicate as your protagonist butterfly Ramana ch v

  1. Date: 8/8/2014 10:32:00 AM
    Your words in poem are as delicate as your protagonist butterfly..fascinating slice

    George   Avatar Elaine George
    Date: 8/11/2014 5:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for dropping by and reading my poetry and for your kind comments. Elaine
  1. Date: 1/2/2013 3:13:00 PM
    Amazing imagery Elaine; it is a gift to be able to do this so effectively! :)

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 7:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week Elaine, beautiful shortie>>James

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 8:43:00 PM
    Wow! : ) A pleasure! Splendid write, Elaine! Congratulations on having this poem featured this week! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 4:09:00 PM
    Hello Elaine. I just melted after reading your poem. Beautiful! Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 8:21:00 PM
    Elaine I reckon that is about as good as it gets - You are always and forever a favorite of mine - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – YF4L -God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 11:36:00 AM
    congrats, very well done.

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 1:33:00 AM
    Elaine, congrats on having your work featured...Raul

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on this wonderful piece being featured this week, Laine! Beautiful and deep. Love, Robin

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 8:42:00 AM
    This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 8:22:00 AM
    Congrats on this selection, Elaine. Is the butterfly's name 'Snowflake?" Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 7:44:00 AM
    What a wonderful, though rather sad and touching, poem of nature's delicacy, Elaine! I'm so glad to catch it here among the well deserved featured poems this week! ~ congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 3:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Lainie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 12:20:00 AM
    Congrats on your featured poem this week Elaine.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 2:08:00 PM
    Wow, 3 great entries in a row...Raul

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 5:47:00 AM
    Lainie,congratulations on your three poems making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 8:51:00 AM
    Congrats on this selection, Elaine. A beautiful image, chilly though. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 6:21:00 AM
    Congrats Lainie on all 3 poems making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar

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