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Snared

My heart snared in the gentleness of your love, encased in the pure ambrosia of your very being. Captivated from first eye shot, to be carried like a shadow, this euphoria you cascade. And I sit the King as you bathe my realm in beauty, every corner blessed in your serenity, every raindrop but a gentle kiss. My Queen within my dreams, the princess in my garden, the fragrance of the flowers, the air of all desires. The living of my day, the starlight of my night, the sinking of the sun, and every dawn that's won, these things you are to me, for always and ever be. Caress this heart of mine, let the souls combine, sate these dreams of ours, beneath our guiding stars.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/11/2012 4:32:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 1/6/2011 7:26:00 AM
a beautiful piece, lovely, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 1/6/2011 4:28:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fine poetry with us today Daniel. I am happy to have been able to read yours today. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/6/2011 4:00:00 AM
I enjoyed the metaphors you have worded so well in this emotional and romantic write, Daniel
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Date: 1/5/2011 8:04:00 PM
Extremely romantic in nature Daniel and very emotional too..to feel this way toward another human being is awesome..luv the ambrosia of your being line.. very sultry luv..
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Date: 1/5/2011 11:35:00 AM
Very romantic and passionate writing...Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...I especially like the last four lines..Your review of my work was very encouraging..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2011 11:08:00 AM
Metaphors like stars unknowable arrayed. I enjoyed reading this.
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