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Snapshot

A badly framed picture by someone who didn't understand just how important this moment was. A very young woman standing in front of the Eiffel Tower. Framed by the half curve of the base, the line of her body, a little self conscious, extends to the line of the tower, which leads up to a wintry Parisian sky, high clouds and cold blue, that you sometimes see in old French paintings. I look at her familiar face, with its sort of quizzical pride. "Look, it's me! I'm in Paris, can you believe that I could ever do this? "Yes", I think, "Yes!", remembering all those sad, low, and confused past times, when I told you over and over, that I knew you could. Just a snapshot.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/25/2010 12:33:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive write that I enjoyed reading today..Keep the creative pen flowing presenting us with much enjoyment as we read your works...Sara
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Date: 6/25/2010 12:28:00 PM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Ahellas. Love, Carol
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