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Smelling the Flowers

A flower is still in bloom As the summer exiting soon And, the sweet smell is tempting But, soon it will lie down To give way to a sprouting bud Then butterflies keep hovering Of differing beauty of the future Obliviously, time may have walked so fast And, the bud reinvigorated Later to spread out her exotic petals Flower, you are endowed not abandoned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/25/2012 1:56:00 PM
this is sweet. I think the ending is lovely!
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Date: 8/25/2012 4:52:00 AM
nice poem ;-)
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Date: 8/25/2012 4:45:00 AM
A golden gem Dalila....beautiful poem. - Have a lovely weekend - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2012 12:50:00 AM
Umm seems unfinished. What exactly is it about? I'm too tired to guess.
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