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Slipping Away

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Slipping Away

She sits and plays her computer games Sometimes she does not remember names Of the people she plays with every day A little at a time her memory slips away Cannot remember what she did yesterday As she slips further into her mind She leaves all her memory behind And she knows one day the time will come When she wont remember anythig or anyone Today she knows the years are slipping by As she sits and wipes the tear from her eye Each day she seems to go further away Until one day thats where she will stay carolann crowley 3/24/2012

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  1. Date: 3/25/2012 10:50:00 PM
    Carol, i know how this feels...i once was forgotten.. because my life was in front of a computer.....take care and have yourself a good night~LUV*PD

  1. Date: 3/25/2012 8:58:00 PM
    Awesome descriptive write sad how minds are slowly erased, hopefully they will find a cure one day for alzhemer's.

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 8:55:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing your talent with us Carol Ann, you speak of a heart felt subject matter, well expressed hugs vie

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 5:31:00 PM
    loved this one,great job,enjoyed it,so sad

  1. Date: 3/24/2012 5:03:00 PM
    Excellent writing, I enjoyed reading your poem Carol. Love, Carol