Home » Poems » Nette Onclaud » Slick Limerick

Slick Limerick

a dancing queen called nette onclaud rocked hip hop steps in tasseled shroud she leapt in thin air wind blew her false hair... shaved head bowed to a cheering crowd *yayy! * © ----------- CONTEST: PD’s Slick Limerick

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/1/2012 6:47:00 PM

Wow Nette this presents quite a picture. A fun piece that I much enjoyed reading. May laughter and happiness stalk you for life. TLee

James Fraser

Date: 10/2/2011 1:37:00 PM

Koolio slick poetry Princess Nette. False hair I do not believe, but a "Dancing Queen" I do believe. Many congrats on your win in the contest :) your King smiles :)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/30/2011 10:46:00 AM

Congrats on your win, nette. Nice going. luv Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/29/2011 6:25:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2011 1:11:00 AM

Congratulations in PD"s slick limerick contest, Nette. How are you doing, sweetie?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2011 12:11:00 PM

NETTE,,, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR SLICK LIMERICK,,, THANK YOU,..P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/28/2011 10:59:00 AM

Congrats Nette luv on a dazzling win with this cleverly crafted entry my friend.. am your dancing queen partner luv..hope u feel better by now..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/28/2011 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations Nette, on your "Slick Limerick" contest win sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/28/2011 10:25:00 AM

Well done nette. Congratulations

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/24/2011 10:01:00 AM

Interesting one..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winners' circle for sure..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your kind comments were uplifting...Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/23/2011 9:57:00 PM

What a description of yourself and I don't believe a word of it but got a good chuckle.

Kash Poet

Date: 9/23/2011 7:13:00 AM

Haha this is very funny...well I have seen your shaved head once.Best wishes.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/22/2011 11:49:00 PM

yeah yeah Nette luv.. awesome lines of grand description of my friend sweetie Nette ..good luck in the contest.. oh u did not have false hair did u luv???

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 9/22/2011 11:02:00 PM

This week I was hospitalized so was fortunate enough to get to read a ton of great poetry. Life is nice when you slow down and read good work. Quite a few of these Slick Limericks have showed up on my screen. Yours is Very Brittany-Esque and Diva! ABSO-phreaking-LUTELY Fabulous!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2011 9:43:00 PM

I bet you looked just as great with a shaved head as with your hair. Because great beauties can get away with that!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/22/2011 9:22:00 PM

ha! great picture you create here nette. love it!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/22/2011 5:58:00 PM

LOL, love the picture this one conjures up, Nette. I've just noticed a congrats from Linda-Marie so I must have placed in your contest - thanks - it was great fun!

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/22/2011 9:25:00 AM

Have sent you soup mail Nette..

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 9/22/2011 6:21:00 AM

:-) Funny! (I hope--- as many cancer patients also opt out to shave their heads when the chemo starts to make them go bald) Not sure if I was going to try this one --- you make me want to give it a go! Hope you are well. Need to catch up on my reading and commenting tonight. Monkey is asleep - its 6 am here. I just put her BACK to sleep--- again... Sigh. TIRED MAMA might be my next poem title.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 9/22/2011 3:42:00 AM

oh..this.. going to beat everyone else..glad to know u r a dancing queen..but about the hair if its true ..well..

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/22/2011 12:56:00 AM

Wow nette, this is a true contest winning poem right here!! And it's quite funny, not if you really lost your wig...that would not be so funny though! But for a poem it's hilarious!! Great work!!