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Slick Limerick

a dancing queen called nette onclaud 

rocked hip hop steps in tasseled shroud

     she leapt in thin air 
             
        wind blew her false hair... 
             
shaved head  bowed to a  cheering crowd 



*yayy! *
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CONTEST: PD’s  Slick Limerick

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Terry L. Allen Date: 5/1/2012 6:47:00 PM Wow Nette this presents quite a picture. A fun piece that I much enjoyed reading. May laughter and happiness stalk you for life. TLee Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 10/2/2011 1:37:00 PM Koolio slick poetry Princess Nette. False hair I do not believe, but a "Dancing Queen" I do believe. Many congrats on your win in the contest :) your King smiles :) Login to Reply

Ralph Taylor Date: 9/30/2011 10:46:00 AM Congrats on your win, nette. Nice going. luv Ralph Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/29/2011 6:25:00 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., nette Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/29/2011 1:11:00 AM Congratulations in PD"s slick limerick contest, Nette. How are you doing, sweetie? Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/28/2011 12:11:00 PM NETTE,,, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR SLICK LIMERICK,,, THANK YOU,..P.D. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/28/2011 10:59:00 AM Congrats Nette luv on a dazzling win with this cleverly crafted entry my friend.. am your dancing queen partner luv..hope u feel better by now.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/28/2011 10:48:00 AM Congratulations Nette, on your "Slick Limerick" contest win sponsored by P.D. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Bob Quigley Date: 9/28/2011 10:25:00 AM Well done nette. Congratulations Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/24/2011 10:01:00 AM Interesting one..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winners' circle for sure..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your kind comments were uplifting...Sara Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/23/2011 9:57:00 PM What a description of yourself and I don't believe a word of it but got a good chuckle. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 9/23/2011 7:13:00 AM Haha this is very funny...well I have seen your shaved head once.Best wishes. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/22/2011 11:49:00 PM yeah yeah Nette luv.. awesome lines of grand description of my friend sweetie Nette ..good luck in the contest.. oh u did not have false hair did u luv??? Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 9/22/2011 11:02:00 PM This week I was hospitalized so was fortunate enough to get to read a ton of great poetry. Life is nice when you slow down and read good work. Quite a few of these Slick Limericks have showed up on my screen. Yours is Very Brittany-Esque and Diva! ABSO-phreaking-LUTELY Fabulous! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/22/2011 9:43:00 PM I bet you looked just as great with a shaved head as with your hair. Because great beauties can get away with that!! Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 9/22/2011 9:22:00 PM ha! great picture you create here nette. love it! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/22/2011 5:58:00 PM LOL, love the picture this one conjures up, Nette. I've just noticed a congrats from Linda-Marie so I must have placed in your contest - thanks - it was great fun! Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 9/22/2011 9:25:00 AM Have sent you soup mail Nette.. Login to Reply

Cyndi Macmillan Date: 9/22/2011 6:21:00 AM :-) Funny! (I hope--- as many cancer patients also opt out to shave their heads when the chemo starts to make them go bald) Not sure if I was going to try this one --- you make me want to give it a go! Hope you are well. Need to catch up on my reading and commenting tonight. Monkey is asleep - its 6 am here. I just put her BACK to sleep--- again... Sigh. TIRED MAMA might be my next poem title. Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 9/22/2011 3:42:00 AM oh..this.. going to beat everyone else..glad to know u r a dancing queen..but about the hair if its true ..well.. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 9/22/2011 12:56:00 AM Wow nette, this is a true contest winning poem right here!! And it's quite funny, not if you really lost your wig...that would not be so funny though! But for a poem it's hilarious!! Great work!! Login to Reply