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Sleepy Cows

the cows are asleep snuggle closer to get warm frightened by the bus

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/5/2009 6:37:00 AM
thank you - I've been working on creating haikus from my dreams - this is one in which there were lots of cows asleep by the side of the road and I was in a school bus that had an accident and was toppling end over end...
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Date: 12/4/2009 2:49:00 PM
Hahaha,,this made me chuckle..those poor sleepy cows..lets let them sleep,What next after the bus?the tractor?:)..love your style in writing,,well down R-Charma
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Date: 12/4/2009 12:08:00 PM
Nice work Ra, loved the image this paints...Raul
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