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Sleepless Night

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Pillowed feathers,
Caressing a precious moment around my tender skin.
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Teardrops, bagged eyes, a way of sin
The mirror reveals a lost eternal soul
A conniving move against tonight's phantom glow
Voices circle the insomniac moon
Like magic and beauty, "I AM" gone with the wind

The idea of love, 
broken like yesterday's wishbone.
She is leaving
her arms, my shelter
her wings
her teardrops gone forever. 
Never will she suffer-
Never will she return-
All I have is one last memory
tracing what is left
one last breath
tequila vice
washing away the pain.....


At Last Now I See!
Under the drunken stars 
I had an epiphany 
Striking like a match
A sunken treasure 
At Last I Knew
you don't belong 
you were there for the taking
Weak and sick, no longer sane
Memories lost, no longer -her
My Mother! 
What has become of her?

You're a demon, who played us all
made us cry, while you slowly took her away
the way you ravaged her body
nip nap both her legs
fed her through a straw
the way she rapidly forgot
our names:
our faces:
I hate you Alzheimer
I hate the way you took her the first time!
I hate you Death
I hate the way you took her that final moment!

Sleepless nights and pillowed feathers,
Caressing a precious moment around my tender skin
Pretending my mother tucked them in
Anything to help me get past my sleepless nights.

7-08-13
Sad & depressing mood

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  1. Date: 8/10/2015 7:55:00 PM
    Talk about setting the mood.. This amazing write rocks! Congrats on your win, Linda!

  1. Date: 8/5/2015 12:07:00 PM
    I feel you in this outstanding poem of yours my dearest sis. I know, you love your mom sooo much. I'm so honored and grateful to read it again. Hugging it lovingly and you.Thank you so much! Many warm congrats both on your win and this priceless gem. Stopping by as well to say Hello, send smiles, hugs and kisses, thanking you for the mail and everything. God bless you my loving sis! love lots forever sis-BFF Leo

  1. Date: 8/4/2015 7:53:00 AM
    Pleased to be back with congratulations, Linda! Enjoyed reading this powerful write once more. ~ paul

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 11:09:00 PM
    Superb write PD A that's so worthy of great win! Big congrats!

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 7:02:00 PM
    So sad Linda...I went through this with my father....congrats on the win

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 4:14:00 PM
    I know this poem is real. :( SKAT

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 1:49:00 PM
    A real gem, Linda. Congrats! hugs

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 12:44:00 PM
    Heart breaking and powerful write, a 7 and congratulations on your win hugs eve

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 11:18:00 AM
    Speechless..... Applaud!!

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 9:15:00 AM
    PD, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your mood contest win. :-)Alexis

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 8:07:00 AM
    such a powerful write Linda congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 6:51:00 AM
    A poignant and powerful write PD...well penned....Congrats on your win...

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 5:58:00 AM
    great write Linda , great subject to cover , brings it home to the reader how fragile we are xxxIan

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 4:26:00 AM
    Really loved this poem Linda, I judge blindly and didnt even know it was yours. Congratulations on your win, it really is an awesome piece of work highlighting an important subject. Thank you for taking part.

  1. Date: 4/6/2015 8:41:00 AM
    Oh! how powerful, and yet tinged with tenderness. Alzheimer's is a cruel condition; my dad had it for a year before death relieved him of its clutch. I am sure you have lovelier memories to make up for this. hugs // paul

  1. Date: 3/22/2015 4:13:00 PM
    Still thrilling and enlightening us with your bare sou, Sleepless Nights.l. You have my condolences. I know how difficult it is to cope after your mom passes, been there. Congratulations, I noticed you were chosen best poet. You're one poet that should get many accolades. Bert Cisneros

  1. Date: 2/12/2015 10:16:00 AM
    Love is the answer! You reflect it beautifully in your care in these words & in this poem. With much admiration-

  1. Date: 9/22/2014 9:17:00 PM
    Very deep raw emotions.

  1. Date: 8/29/2014 2:09:00 PM
    Dear Linda, Your poem deserves power to explain the story of your sleepless night because of your mother's illness Alzheimer. You are too much worried and in pain because you have missed her now. Very nice word selection and flow of poem. Excellent creativity. Thanks and regards. Kamal

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 9:38:00 PM
    PD What an emotionally powerful and intense write. Full of sadness and sorrow that tugs at the readers heart. Thank you for the nice comment on my Train Of Pain poem.

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