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Below is the poem entitled Skyline which was written by poet Deneen White. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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the magnetic pull..
of the way the...
ocean meets...
the sky...
where does one end...
and the other begin...


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  1. Date: 11/2/2008 6:03:00 PM
    This is really touching. I also like your question at the end. This reminds me of the sunset in the Caribbean. The sky always seems to unite with the blue sea on the horizon, thus giving a royal blend of God's grace for all to enjoy it beauty. This is an awesome job! ~Joseph

  1. Date: 10/31/2008 9:48:00 PM
    The horizon is a tricky thing ... thats why folks used to think the world was flat ... smile ... wonderful write here Deneen!

  1. Date: 10/31/2008 6:56:00 PM
    There are some things science will never explain, and faith will be the answer. Vince

  1. Date: 10/31/2008 7:56:00 AM
    Very well written Deneen. Beautiful picture painted.

  1. Date: 10/31/2008 3:31:00 AM
    A gorgeous visual here, and a heart a true fith and love. love Kristin

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 6:00:00 PM
    A beautiful poem reflecting infinity. Very thoughtful, indeed. I recall one of the Quatrains from my book Rubai'yat of Josh Malihabadi - A Drop and the Ocean which reads: My nerves were seized by a strong current. In an immense measure my energy spent. The moment I placed an atom on my palm. The wieght of the entire solar system descent. Thanks also for your valuable comments on my poem The Inexhaustible Love. -Mohammad