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Six Baby Ducklings

six baby ducklings sailing behind proud mother... empty broken shells seasonal--ducklings--spring Written: 31/10/2011 Margaret A Linton Lassie contest: strict haiku sponsor: Charles Henderson

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 11:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest Margaret. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2011 9:54:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/12/2011 2:36:00 PM

charming image! Congrad's Light & love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/11/2011 11:50:00 AM

Your last line here sure tied everything so well-- and I sure can imagine those duckling behind proud mama duck! Really charming! Super congrats on your win, Margaret :D

Kash Poet

Date: 11/11/2011 10:34:00 AM

Nice picture you have painted here Marg.Congrats on your win.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 11/11/2011 7:50:00 AM

Margaret, congratulations on your 3rd place win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2011 1:12:00 AM

M..~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 8:24:00 PM

Congrats Margaret on a terrific win for this spectacular Haiku luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 8:16:00 PM

Cute, very cute, marg!! I loved the picture you showed Congratulations.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/10/2011 2:10:00 PM

Margaret~Talk about an AH-HA! Those empty broken shells really AH'haaaad me. YOu wrote such a powerful haiku...I am just learning this form and when I saw the word "proud" I was wondering if that were an emotion an animal has....I am so excited to see this one place so high in such a competitive contest! High 5, girl! Gwendolen