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Singularity

When I forgive my brothers and sisters I don't ask them to join with me. I only remind myself that we're already joined but that I won't know this to be true until I make all points of time in all dimensions of the universe converge back to the single thought of separation that has come and gone in a cosmic instant for which I still haven't forgiven myself.

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Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 9/3/2009 4:01:00 PM

This is so beautiful. I see the whole of the universe within these words and it is so massive yet infinitismally small at the same time. Great work!

John Freeman

Date: 7/12/2009 6:05:00 PM

You said you thought you were batting about 40%, thats really good compared to others who aren't trying. You have to first learn that your are love, before you can be love in the world. And understand that whatever happens in the world doesn't change the fact that you are love. This will enforce your effert in the world. And set you free from the emnity of your natural mind, that will condemn you by accusing you when you fail in the world. If I can help you in any way just ask. Sincerely jm

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2009 9:39:00 PM

From what I know of you, Yoni, it doesn't seem like there could be anything to forgive. Your poem illustrates a mature perspective that is rare. I'm lucky to call you my friend. Love, Carolyn

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/27/2009 9:08:00 PM

Jesus Christ's gospel is not completed until our hearts are motivated as you were to write this great poem. Bravo

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/26/2009 5:07:00 PM

Yoni, This is very deep and insightful as was your comment on my poem a "Simple Reed". (The allusion that nature is peaceful creates an emotional escape...the allusion of emotional balance.) Your poem, here speaks of already being joined. It makes me think of a human continum...vaguely like they teach in the Mormon Church that we and our ancestors and predecessors are all connected and must be. Or what??? Anyway, thanks for making me think 2x today. Keep writing, my friend. Lovingly, Dane

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/24/2009 11:55:00 PM

ow my how beautiful is this-------that cosmic instant in time where forgivness takes its toll and we are serene once more--amen--charma