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Silver Kiss

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Silver Kiss

His kiss was death
not life, the chains
and dungeons of a nightmare.
Against the free dream-
smell of salt air.
So here I am
stuck in the mud
created by tears of crimson
emptied painfully and 
an overactive mind.
But death to the mind.
The air slipping away,
The darkness all around.
Disgustingly brilliant.
Yet I walk away
leaving my body 
in the dirt.
Buried alive.

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  1. Date: 12/9/2008 8:53:00 PM
    A very forward poem, poetry like this should be praised, well done :). Check out some of my work, its different. Thanks, Conor J

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 7:17:00 PM
    O God I'm slow... It is suppose to say "Wow, that's deep.

  1. Date: 12/9/2008 7:16:00 PM
    While, that was deep.

  1. Date: 7/17/2008 6:18:00 PM
    I had a friend tell me, Happiness is the most important thing in life...he was such a brilliant man, and I miss him so much...Always, Christy