Silver Haze

*                     ~Dark Silver Haze~                               *

   (side#1)                                         (side #2)

come taste life                  ----------  Heart-warming wine
old and stale,                   ----------   Jot down a line
unflavored, unpolished,      ---------   Mood changes hue
A sour, dim shade              ---------   To sweet silver blue

the lowest feeling              ---------- How high the cost
eternal gray sky               ----------  How much is lost
hollow memories               ---------- Back payment due
A sour, dim shade             ---------  To sweet silver blue 

weak limbs, overpower         ------- Head shake and sigh
moments of lights              --------  None left to deny
everything ends                 --------  Insight in view
A sour, dim shade             --------  To sweet silver blue 


torn from reality             --------   Somehow I gain
low spirits of sorrow        --------  Beauty from pain
bitter and dull,                 --------- As thoughts turn to you
A sour, dim shade           --------   To sweet silver blue


**A deep Look Into The eyes of the Poet Destroyer**

~A Tim Ryerson Collaboration~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/28/2015 7:49:00 AM
A delightful collaboration, joining young and older experiences together....and it becomes our gain, as the sour, dim blue changes to sweet silver blue! ~ All the best *~* paul
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Date: 3/20/2015 3:58:00 PM
Very powerful and insightful. I like it a lot.
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Date: 7/13/2014 4:06:00 PM
Amazing how each one of us see things so differently! I really enjoyed reading this Linda. You and my friend, Tim have created a great collabortion. bfn Elaine
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Date: 7/9/2014 4:07:00 PM
Just saying hi, sweetie! Have a great day.
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Date: 5/11/2014 1:02:00 PM
PD This is the most unique and creative write I have seen of yours. It is different but very intriguing to see the comparison of the lists. Thank you for the nice comment on my My Past poem.
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Date: 4/15/2014 1:27:00 PM
Very original Linda, great read!
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Date: 1/5/2014 11:34:00 PM
This is one of my all time favorites of yours did you know it my friend. i love how you can play off both sides, i read this to my dark street poet my son jared and he loved it to. cheri
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Date: 11/26/2013 11:02:00 PM
This. Is beautiful <3 I love every moment of it.
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Date: 9/11/2013 3:25:00 PM
Lovely collaboration, I like it, paints a silvery picture
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Date: 9/7/2013 5:43:00 PM
I like it, Linda. It all depends on how you look at it. Enjoyed! Have a lovely weekend, my sweet friend and thank you.
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Date: 9/6/2013 9:29:00 AM
I absolutely love this poem. I love the way it was written, not just the words, but the creative style. Everything is connected and both sides intertwine with each other as well as themselves. It's very clever. Much love to you and your talent! :)
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Date: 8/25/2013 6:17:00 PM
unusual and very beautiful piece of writing lovely style
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Date: 8/23/2013 5:51:00 PM
Love the poem and the concept. It's spiritual in a ghostly sort of way. True feeling of two people playing off of each others emotions. Nice collaboration. As always love your stuff. Satisfied... you bet sister. Kilmer
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Date: 8/22/2013 12:11:00 PM
A sour dim shade to sweet silver blue... wow, awesome collaborative journey :)
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Date: 8/22/2013 10:27:00 AM
I really like this one, especially set up like an LP record. Jack
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Date: 8/19/2013 2:58:00 PM
ahhh, "the sweet silver blue", life in Oregon~ lovely write
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Date: 8/15/2013 6:50:00 PM
Dreamy...and very creative. I quite like reading collaborations - especially ones that involve your writing. Great job PD and Tim! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/8/2013 4:24:00 PM
I felt like I was in a dream world as I was reading this. It took me to someplace I have never been before. Well done! Also, thank you for reading my poem "A Fairy's Fantasy", and for the nice comments. I really appreciate it! By the way, I did enter it into your poetry contest! I can't wait to see who wins! This is the first contest I have entered on PoetrySoup.
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Date: 8/8/2013 11:54:00 AM
YOU ALWAYS EXPRESS YTOUR SELF WELL MY FRIEND LOVE YOUR EMOTION HERE XXX DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 8/6/2013 2:46:00 PM
A very beautiful poem. Thank you for the very nice review of my writing. Roger Dale Hadden.
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Date: 8/2/2013 5:04:00 PM
Just like I told you, I'm ridin' your coat-tails dear lady, and PLEASE don't remove your coat!...Well, on SECOND thought...
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Date: 8/2/2013 1:56:00 PM
Wow, this reads well, so intimate, well done to you both ..
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Date: 7/31/2013 3:06:00 PM
Hey Poet Destroyer, this is Robert Barrett and i like you poem Silver haze. I could picture myself sittin outside just feeling life. I also pictured my self at a beach. I like your poem and you describing life in moments. I was feeling the poem and I was relaxed.
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Date: 7/30/2013 4:25:00 AM
This is a very interesting poetry style,, I have never seen it before,,, can you advise of the format for this poetry style,,, again enjoyed the read blessings sueellen
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Date: 7/29/2013 10:38:00 PM
Art is subjective. No one can say what is bad or good only what they like or don't, and I liked this-- I'm definitely going to plagiarize you. Of course, I'll write something better like when Shakespeare stole "Hamlet" from the original author, but I'll be sure to send you a postcard of my new ferrari when they're done praising me about what a revolutionary, literary art form I came up with. Hah! Yeah baby! I love it! I'm definitely going to plagiarize you! Hahahahaha...
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