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Silent Wonder

I like these moments of silence, When I can go chasing the threads of my thoughts... Start with a feeling, Weave a dream... Gather the moments as they pass by, To flap my wings and learn to fly... Learn to fly.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2011 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Girish. Love Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 2/23/2011 10:54:00 AM

Love it. Flying. I've had such dreams, but not often. I had to tell myself that I could fly before I went to sleep and concentrate on a good mantra. The skill is especially good if you dream of falling off a cliff. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/21/2011 1:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Girish. Love, Carol

Dr Sarthak Sahoo

Date: 4/29/2009 7:21:00 PM

finally one i definitely felt... one that seeped within as th words flowed across my eyes... was beginning to feel you are losing touch... not that the other works are bad... but they felt incomplete except this and th one bout your lover... but this work my friend is a work of high calibre... thanks for the treat... i want more

Nivitha Ann Paul

Date: 4/5/2009 1:41:00 AM

nice poem..........

Phillip Chong

Date: 3/4/2009 9:15:00 PM

simple and nice.. i wish that life was like this.