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Silent Gold

When we watch a patch of sunlight shedding, gold across the ground, is to know that nature's clock is ticking, making not a sound
----------------------------------------------------- In honor of Black Eyed Susan's Contest: Silence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/29/2012 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:30:00 PM
Unique and creative work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie xx
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:41:00 PM
CARRIE;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:14:00 PM
I like this Carrie. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/25/2012 6:12:00 PM
Carrie, you always have such a neat way of stating things, so well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 8/25/2012 1:10:00 PM
good one, Carrie, and congrats in the contest!
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:47:00 AM
Very nice... Congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:29:00 AM
Beautiful imagination pictured beautifully. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/20/2012 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful couplet, Carrie!...reads like a winner to me...Thanks for your kind and caring comment on my entry into John Heck's contest...I wrote it a few years ago and I'm afraid it was based on a true experience...We lost our son in a car 'accident' in 2001 (he was hit by a drunk driver)...the other driver came away with only a sprained ankle...by the way I knew when I read your entry that it was a winner for sure...have a great day my friend! - Tim
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Date: 8/17/2012 8:37:00 PM
Excellent couplet Carrie!Love it!
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Date: 8/16/2012 3:51:00 AM
Carrie I can se it now, tick tock, I like good luck..David
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Date: 8/15/2012 10:56:00 PM
your awesome..good luck in the contest...pd
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Date: 8/15/2012 3:34:00 PM
this was awesome.. So powerful in so few lines.. good luck int he contest :) cory
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