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Silent Destruction

The violent 'V' Disguised in a black rain coat Dancing the meadow Gone undetected A moment of destruction Silently Creeping Ravishment rising Displacing time, hope, lives, dreams Silent aftermath -------------------------------------------------- With respect to tornados

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  1. Date: 10/21/2009 8:36:00 PM
    Nice Mr. A-Lopez love it haha u rock gangster!!!!!!!!...<3 Cilla Jaye

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 1:04:00 PM
    All be it destructive, but it oozes beauty and power. I would rather die in a Tornado than by some thing man made, nice>>James

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 10:57:00 AM
    Cool Beans.I am inlove with this poem - Has been added to my FAV XD

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 9:53:00 PM
    Brilliant imagery! Very true on what they can do in a moment notice!

  1. Date: 5/9/2009 10:04:00 AM
    Nice, I have a tornadoe poem as well. Good write, Ever been in one??

  1. Date: 5/6/2009 4:09:00 PM
    I can smell what the rock is cookin, & it smells like a storm! Great Job my friend. Check a little biscuit I cooked for you called Fisherman. It's about a cat I know who..... well, you'll see. Mike

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 10:56:00 AM
    Excellent write, Abe,....... living in Oklahoma, I hope this hasn't been a personal experience you've had! Please check soup mail, whenever you have a moment...thanks! :)

  1. Date: 5/4/2009 4:39:00 AM
    And there has been many blowing lately ... now its swine flu ... walk safely, my friend.

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 6:19:00 AM
    Abe, I was away for a while but I have returned to a beauty ... there is this movie V for vengeance ... and now my tornado is morphing into mythic things. Love and peace.

  1. Date: 4/30/2009 7:29:00 PM
    Abe, You are so right about tornadoes. They are to be respected and avoided. Nice write. D S-J

  1. Date: 4/30/2009 4:02:00 AM
    Gosh Abe such a vivid description. Their power is hypnotizing then as you say the aftermath.

  1. Date: 4/28/2009 1:16:00 PM
    Awsum write Abe,...interesting! james

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 9:55:00 PM
    The sounds of a tornado are silent untile the core hits. Then the silence returns. Excellent descriptions. Tyler

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 9:01:00 PM
    Yes, tornados can wreak havoc on beautiful land and homes, but, you have captured a beautiful image in this wonderful write. Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 4/27/2009 6:38:00 PM
    This is beautiful. Thank you for commenting my poem. No intentions to disqualify any of your poems; the far eastern poetry forms tangle...apologizing. Your poetry is lovely to read. I wish you all the best.

  1. Date: 4/26/2009 10:10:00 AM
    I'm not lost, this "Choka" is well written and structured. Keep on sharing, I like it. Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/25/2009 11:38:00 PM
    Great writing. I love the line "Disguised in a black rain coat" an excellent description. tornadoes are such a powerful force of nature. You captured the truth of them well in this one. Smiles from Lolita

  1. Date: 4/25/2009 2:24:00 PM
    This a beautiful haiku (not choka..sorry). I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry.

  1. Date: 4/25/2009 2:23:00 PM
    Fascinating choka.

  1. Date: 4/25/2009 12:41:00 PM
    Excellent write, Abe. The cyclones give little warning, but the devastation lingers in the "Silent aftermath."