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Silence of a Flight

Far overhead the skyline bids goodnight, 
Bestowing crown to hazy moon on flight
As silent pillows dream, breaths ebb day’s rites

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Kash Poet

October 12, 2012 at 8:55 AM

Soupmail.....

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 29, 2012 at 9:56 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

August 27, 2012 at 3:56 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Modupe Sefunmi

August 27, 2012 at 8:17 AM

Lovely write! You are such a deep poet! Congrats on your win!

Dinda Minardi

August 26, 2012 at 7:08 AM

A very good imagery, Nette. As always you gave me new vocabulary ;) Congratttss!!! Hugs, Dinda.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

August 26, 2012 at 6:48 AM

Nice one nette congratulations xx

Poet Destroyer A

August 25, 2012 at 8:54 PM

NEETE;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

Lee Ramage

August 25, 2012 at 5:53 PM

A very eloquent poem. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Joy Wellington

August 25, 2012 at 5:46 PM

Lovely, a dream of a piece...great write Susan, congrats. One love. Joy Wells

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2012 at 12:57 PM

Beautiful one. congrats on the win, Nette.

Kim Merryman

August 25, 2012 at 12:40 PM

A lovely write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Terry O'Leary

August 25, 2012 at 10:37 AM

Very nice... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Bl Devnath

August 16, 2012 at 12:44 PM

A very good message of silence. Nicely done. Wish you all the best in the contest. Loved always. bl

Kash Poet

August 14, 2012 at 8:05 PM

How is Manila?

Kash Poet

August 14, 2012 at 8:04 PM

Wow!! amazing........

Andrea Dietrich

August 14, 2012 at 6:42 PM

beautiful both in sight and soundlessness!

Sara Kendrick

August 14, 2012 at 4:18 PM

Reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading this eve..I am looking forward to some of that pillow dreamland time...Good luck in the contest..Sara

Sara Kendrick

August 14, 2012 at 4:18 PM

Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara

Don Johnson

August 14, 2012 at 4:00 PM

you paint a picture with the words, the moon is there, alll well the world, the coming of the night...well done babe..

Tim Ryerson

August 14, 2012 at 11:06 AM

'the skyline bids goodnight' and 'as silent pillows dream'...wow...don't know how you do it but you sure do it and you do it with elegance and grace, Nette!...have a wonderful day - Tim

Jack Horne

August 14, 2012 at 10:09 AM

love this beautiful write, Nette - a big winner, for sure

Elizabeth Wesley

August 14, 2012 at 9:56 AM

This breathes peace and tranquility Nette; your pen will find the winners circle again luv. :)

Barbara Gorelick

August 14, 2012 at 7:34 AM

Good one Nette...I love pillow dreams...BG

Russell Sivey

August 14, 2012 at 6:45 AM

What a fabulous and entertaining write! You sure can create a perfect silent pillow for everyone to dream on my friend! I just love the inclusion of the moon in your poem...I really love the moon in poetry, it has a special feel within its confines! Your piece is glorious Nette, I can't imagine a better silence poem than this one, you sure did it! Great Work!!

Mad Hu

August 14, 2012 at 5:15 AM

very tender write:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 14, 2012 at 4:43 AM

Another contest Nette.... This is so lovely and soft - I give you first prize !!!! - Luck, luck, hope Susan like it to. - Have a beautiful day Nette. Love // Anne-Lise :)

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