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Silence of a Flight

Far overhead the skyline bids goodnight, Bestowing crown to hazy moon on flight As silent pillows dream, breaths ebb day’s rites ----- --- - Silence Contest sponsored by Susan

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Kash Poet

Date: 10/12/2012 8:55:00 AM

Soupmail.....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2012 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2012 3:56:00 PM

Congrats on your great win..Sara

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 8/27/2012 8:17:00 AM

Lovely write! You are such a deep poet! Congrats on your win!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 8/26/2012 7:08:00 AM

A very good imagery, Nette. As always you gave me new vocabulary ;) Congratttss!!! Hugs, Dinda.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/26/2012 6:48:00 AM

Nice one nette congratulations xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2012 8:54:00 PM

NEETE;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/25/2012 5:53:00 PM

A very eloquent poem. Well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/25/2012 5:46:00 PM

Lovely, a dream of a piece...great write Susan, congrats. One love. Joy Wells

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2012 12:57:00 PM

Beautiful one. congrats on the win, Nette.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/25/2012 12:40:00 PM

A lovely write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Terry O'Leary

Date: 8/25/2012 10:37:00 AM

Very nice... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/16/2012 12:44:00 PM

A very good message of silence. Nicely done. Wish you all the best in the contest. Loved always. bl

Kash Poet

Date: 8/14/2012 8:05:00 PM

How is Manila?

Kash Poet

Date: 8/14/2012 8:04:00 PM

Wow!! amazing........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 6:42:00 PM

beautiful both in sight and soundlessness!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2012 4:18:00 PM

Reads like winning material..Enjoyed reading this eve..I am looking forward to some of that pillow dreamland time...Good luck in the contest..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/14/2012 4:18:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara

Don Johnson

Date: 8/14/2012 4:00:00 PM

you paint a picture with the words, the moon is there, alll well the world, the coming of the night...well done babe..

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/14/2012 11:06:00 AM

'the skyline bids goodnight' and 'as silent pillows dream'...wow...don't know how you do it but you sure do it and you do it with elegance and grace, Nette!...have a wonderful day - Tim

Jack Horne

Date: 8/14/2012 10:09:00 AM

love this beautiful write, Nette - a big winner, for sure

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/14/2012 9:56:00 AM

This breathes peace and tranquility Nette; your pen will find the winners circle again luv. :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/14/2012 7:34:00 AM

Good one Nette...I love pillow dreams...BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/14/2012 6:45:00 AM

What a fabulous and entertaining write! You sure can create a perfect silent pillow for everyone to dream on my friend! I just love the inclusion of the moon in your poem...I really love the moon in poetry, it has a special feel within its confines! Your piece is glorious Nette, I can't imagine a better silence poem than this one, you sure did it! Great Work!!

Mad Hu

Date: 8/14/2012 5:15:00 AM

very tender write:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2012 4:43:00 AM

Another contest Nette.... This is so lovely and soft - I give you first prize !!!! - Luck, luck, hope Susan like it to. - Have a beautiful day Nette. Love // Anne-Lise :)