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Silence

"The moon and the night climb through my window" Bathing my waking dreams in its ambient glow The world seems peaceful with the moon in charge The music of silence is the loveliest symphony I know.. First line taken from Carrie's poem Moonlight Sonata 8/29/13

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Jon Arno

Date: 9/13/2013 9:10:00 AM

A beautiful write Barbara

John Beharry

Date: 9/5/2013 12:16:00 PM

This is sooo lovely with images of peacefulness and serenity that lulls me into a state of tranquillity with the symphony of silence. Beautifully painted!

Bakari Matano

Date: 9/2/2013 5:42:00 AM

Barbara, i like the spirit of quoting and acknowledging other poets. Good poem

Maggie Mae Mcafee

Date: 9/1/2013 11:26:00 PM

Beautiful write, Barbara!! Ah...the moon.. xoxo Maggie Mae

Constance La France

Date: 8/31/2013 4:33:00 PM

Barbara, this is so pretty, well done and I want to thank you for my placement in your Cloud Contest, I am very honoured, Constance

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/31/2013 12:19:00 PM

What a lovely write, Barbara! Carrie always has beautiful poetry and your take on it was great too. I found a way to exercise - I go to the community pool every chance I get. Adults swim free if they're doing laps. I swam a mile and a half. Funny how I don't get dizzy in water, but have trouble just getting out of the pool. Thanks for reading my limerick. Sadly, it's true. Sara suggested a remedy I'll try. Miss you! Love, Carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2013 1:53:00 PM

- Just beautiful, Barbara !!! - - Wish you a nice weekend ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2013 12:43:00 PM

Oh !!! You have taken one simple line and did more than I could ever do with it......this is so beautiful.....I'm honored but in awe !! Love yours so much ! Thank you! ps....soup mail coming ! :)