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Sick Trick

You complained, “Don’t come over today -
My throat’s sore, I’m tired, and achy.”
So why are you nude,
In bed with some dude?
If you’re going to lie, pull down the shades!

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  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:57:00 AM
    haha, I remember this one! soupmail

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:22:00 AM
    Susan - my sides are splitting. You write these with such wit.

  1. Date: 6/9/2012 8:10:00 PM
    hahaha. That was really clever, Susan. Geeez, I don't think you did a limerick for my contest but I just know PD will love this.

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 7:02:00 AM
    A beautiful day full of sunshine and good cheer. WOW !!! I am so happy to be able to read your poetry this morning Susan. I wish you a weekend of sunshine and joy and hope you continue to find the inspiration to continue your writing. Will be back reading come Monday I hope. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 3:39:00 AM
    Sick trick, I agree with you B.E.Susan - well written. - Have a lovely weekend to you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 9:59:00 PM
    hummmm! i don't know about this one... aren't limericks suppose to rhyme.... still