Shines Perfectly At Night

The night evolves within the moon Passing the seas having no room Huge it surveys the water here Captivates all, revives what’s clear Passing the seas having no room Moon exclaims with a voice that booms “I am the stream that flows between The Earth and the sky that is seen” Huge it surveys the water here Shining with the suns greatest flare Reflective of any pure light The moon shines perfectly at night Captivates all, revives what’s clear Blowing the minds of many here Deep in space cooling to the view Open minded, dreaming of you
Russell Sivey Form Retourne

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/12/2013 12:11:00 PM
Interesting work..I need to check out the form..If for a contest, should do well..Thanks for your visits this day..Sara
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Date: 9/11/2013 8:20:00 PM
Hey good friend! This one's great... and as Eileen said, "WHAT A FINISHING LINE!" I concur!
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Date: 9/11/2013 6:42:00 PM
Great poem Russell one of your best,......Seren
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Date: 9/11/2013 10:49:00 AM
i'm a moongazer and this refreshing piece stands tall with great tonality and poetic presence, russell.. you always hynotize!.. stunning read of the day!..:) huggs
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Date: 9/11/2013 9:00:00 AM
Russell...WHAT A FINISHING LINE!!!! It is absolutely amazing...beautiful...captivating! :) Great job! When I have time, I would like to check this form out! :) i hope you are well, my dear...Keep posting...Hugs
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Date: 9/11/2013 6:40:00 AM
Wow Russell, this is a beauty and I love the flow of it as well. Awesome write with vivid imagery :) hope you are having a blessed week thus far *hugs*
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Date: 9/11/2013 4:08:00 AM
- Hope your dreams always will be beautiful .. Thank you for this beautiful poem, Russell ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2013 2:51:00 AM
You are the only stream among the all river to write this wonderful piece.....loved reading.
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