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Shepherd's Warning

sunrise painted sky; brilliant reds and pinks warn of storm before sunset

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/16/2013 12:58:00 PM
Red skies at night, sailor's delight. Red skies in morning, sailor's warning. Old poem about weather at sea. Great imagery in your haiku.
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Date: 11/9/2013 9:56:00 AM
I like this one too. Seems I have missed some of your latest posts!!
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Date: 11/6/2013 12:28:00 AM
Nicely done.
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Date: 11/5/2013 12:54:00 AM
"Red sky in the morning, sailor take warning". I remember the late Peter Falk saying that to Jack Lemmon in the film "The Great Race". Good haiku.
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