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Sheol

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Sheol

Dark Knight-tress 

Underneath 
This gown I feel nothing
Silk less feelings
The odor of intimate apparel lessens 
Vanity fare from any sun
Warrior of beauty
Where have you gone?
A fortress of gloom
Not even death wants in
Black nail tips
Brownish plum lips

I close my eyes 
I see them all
The Shadows
Climbing over my soul
The darken deepens 
The stars dim my view
Irremovable makeup
Land becomes an enemy
I become
The Dark Knight-tress
Scolding my next victim

~S~

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  1. Date: 12/5/2014 3:59:00 AM
    a 7! Amazing,, I absolutely love your way with words,,, incredibly good, You rock.

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 6:23:00 PM
    Skat my dear friend loved the ending on this one it's magnificent just wonderful. cheri

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 12:28:00 AM
    Nice Skat... very Nice. Thanks for your congratulations of my win in latest contest of Kelly - Poem on Poetry. I have enjoyed my visit... Verlena

  1. Date: 4/22/2014 3:28:00 PM
    Dark and dramatic effects that permeate into the night. Awesome!! going into my favs. // paul

  1. Date: 3/19/2014 4:28:00 PM
    this is a cool poem bout death

  1. Date: 3/2/2014 7:06:00 PM
    Congratulations on the well-deserved 1st place with this strong piece of Gothi(S)ka(t)!

  1. Date: 3/1/2014 11:25:00 PM
    Wow Skat. Dark Knight-ress indeed. Your words put me in mind of the depiction of hell (sheol) from the movie, "What Dreams May Come" Your poem was expertly written, and I enjoyed it. Grats! Christopher Thor Britt

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 10:22:00 PM
    This is an awesome poem. CAn't remember when it was first posted but I love it. congrats!

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 8:58:00 PM
    Good morning my dearest Skat! Biggest hugs! So glad to read this stunning write of yours once again and saw it won. My big hearty congratulations on your top win! Kudos and more sweet hugs to u! Thank u so much again for sharing. I want also to take this opportunity to thank you for liking my dedicated poems. More blessings to u and your family! Have a great wkend to all! Sending love & smiles this wkend! lovem4ever, Leonora

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 7:38:00 PM
    I do remember this dark poem, because it is on my favorites list! ;) Love this one, SKAT! Congratulations on your win, as well!

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 6:57:00 PM
    Very dramatic. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Cheers.

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 12:12:00 PM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest !!! - A well written poem, Skat. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 11:35:00 AM
    tahnk you G. SKAT

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 9:00:00 AM
    Very impressive poem. Congrats on the win, skat

  1. Date: 2/28/2014 8:53:00 AM
    Congrats Skat on the win . A brilliant one indeed.

  1. Date: 2/20/2014 9:13:00 AM
    Creepy intrigues me, and you know I have a thing for shadows! Great poem :)

  1. Date: 2/15/2014 7:50:00 AM
    Scary poetry, and dark inter sanctum. You linked the words together with frightful meaning and steadfast resolve. You betcha.

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 10:36:00 AM
    Rephaim, I, ever despised by myself...yet a real, dark pArt of my soul! IN-Friggin'-TENSE! "7"!!! Love this SKAT! Wonderfully Dark-yet so real! XOXOXO, Robert

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 2:12:00 AM
    Oh woah dis is dark awesome! Nightmarish thriller. Thumbs up! And warm thnx for d news.

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 7:10:00 PM
    Now you've done it--taken me to that dark, inside place and feel and left me there, thinking, pondering. I'll get out but still remember. Impressive.

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