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Sheltered Dreams Above The Clouds

Flying oh so high above the silhouetted trees
in stark of night salvation comes and floats me on the breeze.

I've sipped the sweet nectar of grace and laid forth all my dreams.
I'll likely fall but I won't fail,I'm nourished by moonbeams.

The light begins to filter through as dawn now beckons in.
The weary stars fade fast away and let the sun begin.

So goes the dance of sheltered wishes,destiny unspoken.
A painted sky will heal my soul and fix whatever's broken.

Tenderly I hold these dreams and see them to fruition.
Above the clouds are where they live awaiting love's nutrition.

Now every breath I draw will be succinctly mine to keep.
Eyes that see such dreams of beauty surely cannot weep.

written June 17th,2013
for contest "Above The Clouds"

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  1. Date: 7/16/2013 7:53:00 PM
    Hi Deb.......just to let you know I listened in to Drake's show..........his reading of this poem was so wonderful.....but also the others you read yourself, kudos to you!! You sounded great, calm and like you were having a great time! Congrats once again!

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 12:51:00 PM
    I heard that you will be on Drake's next show....I absolutely will not miss it...Hope you read this gem on it...SO difficult to write a rhyming poem of any type loaded with beauty, perfect flow, insight and wisdom such as this - Tim

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 3:43:00 PM
    Lovely verse so nice to see you win big. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:26:00 PM
    a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 2:57:00 PM
    Deb congratulations on your outstanding poem. A well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 9:13:00 PM
    Awesome poem. Surely deserve the spot. Congratz on your great win, Deb. :))

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:26:00 PM
    congratulations Deb on your 1st place win, excellent entry xxx

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:39:00 AM
    Congratulations, Deb, on your awesome win with the excellent poem. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 2:04:00 AM
    Great poem! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 12:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Deb. Your words soar, and give us wings... David

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 12:19:00 AM
    Most Beautiful and stunning. love it. Congrats on the win Deb.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 9:44:00 PM
    Hello Deb, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:55:00 PM
    Way to go Deb, I enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on your big no. 1 spot in this contest. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 2:54:00 PM
    Thank you so much for this poem in my contest, Deb. There was a simplicity to this piece and its message. And it would've held strong on its own. But, the final 2 lines, magnificent. You pointed out something that few ever see. When we achieve this peace within self, we have no more reason to cry (other than tears of joy) or to allow the past to hurt us anymore. That's what it's all about. It's one thing to become free, but it's another to stay that way, without excuses. A+.

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:53:00 PM
    Nice set of couplets.

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 6:29:00 PM
    I really enjoyed this write it is soothing and beautifulyl done. Sorry the minataur scared you lol.