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Sheep Less Nights

I open my eyes and to my surprise I was awake. All I could see was tall dolls and people with shaws. running down halls. I pinched myself to try to wake up Why can't I wake up for heaven sake. I was trapped in a dream like state. I walked down stairs that was made of chairs. I jumped up out my sleep and no one heard me not even a peek Where I should have been counting sheep

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Date: 8/29/2015 7:01:00 AM
Thankyou for looking at my light poetry. Yes, I can see the images produced. Very much like a children's story. I'm still new to all of this. I usually just tell my tales at home, but Carol wanted me to share them. Michael
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Date: 8/26/2015 7:58:00 AM
Awesome work right there! Nice title too!
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April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/26/2015 8:50:00 AM
Thank you!!!! I hope to see you again!!!
Date: 8/26/2015 7:15:00 AM
It held me at the title, and blew at the body :)...wonderful and thank you for dropping by :)
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April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/26/2015 8:49:00 AM
I am glad you stopped by. I hope to see you again!!!
Date: 8/25/2015 6:38:00 PM
Love the title to your poem, April. It's double meaning is perfect...along with your poem, too. The imagery with the chair steps really jumped out at me. I also have a sleepless night poem called 'I Dream of Sleep'.
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April Walter Skyy
Date: 8/26/2015 8:48:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by... hope to see you again!!!
Date: 10/20/2012 11:41:00 AM
Like it, well done April - Have a nice weekend. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
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