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She Wears His Name

she wears his name but calls mine she called him "my love" but said i'm "fine" in fact me and him shared the same places i often wonder if she intermingles our faces don't get me wrong i know we all have a past but because he was first doesn't mean i'm last my blood flows through veins as real as your own my heart still yearns for our happy home i know pain is life and life is pain but i know in my heart you should wear my #@$!%! name

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2009 5:53:00 AM
Wow Brian! Heartfelt my friend and the words flow well! I'll be reading you! :)
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Date: 4/22/2009 10:21:00 AM
Great writing, Brian. Love the torment you express so well. Wish life did not have to bring such pain. Indeed, she should be wearing your name! It is rare to find a love so passionate and true. Bravo, Brian!
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Date: 4/19/2009 7:56:00 PM
you point out some mind thinking questions here Brian, love the line I know we all have a past but, because he was first doesn't mean I am last, truely wonderful
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:38:00 AM
this story happeend to my son recently also, he kept calling his girlfriend emma in his sleep exept her name was rachel he even did it sometimes when he was awake, he moved up north rachel left him for other men off the net but the good news is my son got back with emma after being apart long over a year strange but true. God bless from diane
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Date: 4/19/2009 11:35:00 AM
aww a great poem reminds me of what they say is being torn between two lovers where it is possible to be in love with two people at the same time, well written, God bless from diane
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Date: 4/19/2009 3:21:00 AM
ok maybe mrs jones,she got a thing going on-this really reminds me of a song-holds other's name but in love with someone else-very well penned-charma
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Date: 4/19/2009 1:45:00 AM
wow ... your last two lines seem to be screaming out loud! the rhymes flow so well that i forget the angst in this write! well written Brian! ~ Arany
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