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she wears his name

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she wears his name

she wears his name
but calls mine
she called him "my love"
but said i'm "fine"
in fact me and him
shared the same places
i often wonder
if she intermingles our faces
don't get me wrong
i know we all have a past
but because he was first
doesn't mean i'm last
my blood flows through veins
as real as your own
my heart still yearns
for our happy home
i know pain is life
and life is pain
but i know in my heart
you should wear my #@$!%! name

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  1. Date: 5/9/2009 5:53:00 AM
    Wow Brian! Heartfelt my friend and the words flow well! I'll be reading you! :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 10:21:00 AM
    Great writing, Brian. Love the torment you express so well. Wish life did not have to bring such pain. Indeed, she should be wearing your name! It is rare to find a love so passionate and true. Bravo, Brian!

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 7:56:00 PM
    you point out some mind thinking questions here Brian, love the line I know we all have a past but, because he was first doesn't mean I am last, truely wonderful

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 11:38:00 AM
    this story happeend to my son recently also, he kept calling his girlfriend emma in his sleep exept her name was rachel he even did it sometimes when he was awake, he moved up north rachel left him for other men off the net but the good news is my son got back with emma after being apart long over a year strange but true. God bless from diane

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 11:35:00 AM
    aww a great poem reminds me of what they say is being torn between two lovers where it is possible to be in love with two people at the same time, well written, God bless from diane

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 3:21:00 AM
    ok maybe mrs jones,she got a thing going on-this really reminds me of a song-holds other's name but in love with someone else-very well penned-charma

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 1:45:00 AM
    wow ... your last two lines seem to be screaming out loud! the rhymes flow so well that i forget the angst in this write! well written Brian! ~ Arany