She Rides a Horse

She rides a horse 'pon the merry-go-round
The decorated carousel endorse
Memories of long ago now astound
She rides a horse

Carousel music wind up tinkling sound
Touch, sight, scent, food all pleasures reinforce
One enjoyable night forever now renowed

Long ago, short time together, love's course
'Pon the carousel round and round and round
In my aged mind those happy times rehearse
She rides a horse  

Written: August 12, 2013
Poet: Sara Kendrick
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest: Carousel In Roundel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/21/2013 7:24:00 AM
this is really special, sara..congrats on your award and do comment on my blog.. i wrote about you..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/20/2013 8:53:00 PM
another nice winning poem... Sara, congratulations in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL contest... xox~ SKAT
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Date: 8/20/2013 4:07:00 PM
Congratulations Sara...:-)
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Date: 8/20/2013 1:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem on Carousel Sara!Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Date: 8/20/2013 8:18:00 AM
Beautiful piece. Congratulations Sara.
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Date: 8/19/2013 11:40:00 PM
Sara this is the wonderful .. Congrats ...Seren
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Date: 8/19/2013 10:52:00 PM
Many congrats on your win. A wonderful write.
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Date: 8/19/2013 8:17:00 PM
Lovely, should have been a number 1..congrats. BG
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Date: 8/19/2013 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/19/2013 6:55:00 PM
Nicely done, Sara......I want to take a ride with you!
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Date: 8/19/2013 4:44:00 PM
Sara, Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD :-)
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:47:00 PM
Very nice entry & memory! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2013 2:59:00 PM
this was cute, Sara. BIG congrats.
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Date: 8/19/2013 11:02:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Sara
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Date: 8/16/2013 11:02:00 PM
thanks, dear sara.. soup mail!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/13/2013 10:41:00 PM
you chose some great rhymes for your merry go round ride. Very nice, Sara.
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Date: 8/13/2013 10:03:00 AM
Sara, well done... wishing you luck in the contest... LINDA
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Date: 8/13/2013 6:39:00 AM
Really loved this charming memory Sara...
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Date: 8/13/2013 5:08:00 AM
With your sweet memories you have given a beautiful touch in this wonderful writes my friend. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you once again for your comments on my POP SONG poem. Love and best wishes always.. ..Ravindra
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Date: 8/12/2013 7:45:00 PM
great entry wish i had someone to take to the park.
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Date: 8/12/2013 1:30:00 PM
You have done masterfully with this revised edition of your poem! I have really enjoyed reading this new and improved write this afternoon my friend! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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