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She Left

She left without a warning, without a kiss goodbye; She left me in the darkness, without a reason why. She left with her belongings, things she gathered from the start; She left with things most precious, especially my heart. She left me in my teardrops, that I cry alone each day; She left and never looked back, even as I pleaded for her to stay. I sometimes wonder why she left, when she knew I loved her so; Perhaps the real reason is, her heart left a long time ago.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/7/2013 8:10:00 AM
This is so sad. I don't think anybody can help, but maybe knowing you have friends here to share your pain. Your poems rhyme beautifully. Have a nice day. Terry xo
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Date: 12/22/2012 2:38:00 PM
this is so sad, Carl.. yet it produce a beauriful poem...although heartbreaking
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Date: 12/16/2012 9:52:00 PM
Dear Carl, sometimes love dies out.... hoping this is not something you went through... I had a fiance, who never left... LOL.. to bad his feelings were to strong, his heart always stood there, up to this day.. I can not say I feel the same. good rhyme... xox~PD
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Date: 12/16/2012 9:28:00 AM
WHoa Carl! This is heartbreakingly sad! It's hard enough when a loved one leaves us, but when they up and leave without a word, that can be cruel. Well penned!
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