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She Hates

She Hates Her eyes sink back into her head. Her left eye crosses her right and the hate pierces like the sun’s rays on a hot summer day. She calls herself a Christian because it makes her feel safe. She believes that Church is a tangible thing of brick and mortar with a temple and a bell that rings at noon every Sunday. She believes the Anti-Christ is identifiable like another human being. Sadly, like most that call themselves Christians, she is not safe.

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Date: 11/24/2010 9:49:00 AM
Please continue to share your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Thanksgiving Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2010 5:39:00 PM
a warm welcome, this is a good site, and this poem was pretty good, i hope to read more of your writes:), enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:20:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry today with its creative theme on Christianity ... hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. luv destroys hate .. be blessed this happy day luv..
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Date: 11/16/2010 7:02:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tim. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:39:00 AM
OMG! WOW! It's such a sad irony isn't it? I know quite a few like this. Embracing a false sense of hope. Excellent & daring piece here.
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