She Cries Tears

Her eyes show so much emotion inside She has certainly formed a trail of tears Leaving marks where the tears rolled down her face There’s no greater pain than what’s on her face The feeling she has, grows from the inside She cries so much there are a lot of tears She knows no other way but to cry tears Sullen look forms on her, right on her face Crying also happens way deep inside From inside she cries tears onto her face
Entrant into Andrea Dietrich's "Introducing Tritina (a new poetry form for you!)" contest 2/12/2013

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Date: 3/16/2013 5:52:00 PM
Russell, Congratulations on a very fine win!
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Date: 3/14/2013 6:56:00 PM
Another great win Russell...many congratulations...Donna
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Date: 3/10/2013 9:39:00 PM
RUSSELL, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:07:00 PM
Nicely done and easy to follow,Russell. Congratulations on the placement! Keep up the good work! RAY
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Date: 3/10/2013 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win friend Russell :) have a nice day. Maria
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:44:00 AM
Russell congrats on your win, this is wonderful...David
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:06:00 AM
Russell nicely done. I hate those time where sad time brings on the rain. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 3/10/2013 7:03:00 AM
Love this Russell!Congrats on your win in the contest!
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Date: 3/10/2013 12:24:00 AM
Hi, Russell. Thanks for doing a tritina poem for my contest. congratulations. I enjoyed your sensitive poem.
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Date: 2/14/2013 3:23:00 PM
This is a sensitive write, Russell, perfect for Andrea's contest! Best wishes for the contest. It was challenging for me but also fun. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:56:00 AM
Sestina, very nice. I enjoyed you poem. Good luck in the contest my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/13/2013 3:48:00 PM
brave is the one who tries a new form.
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Date: 2/13/2013 11:33:00 AM
Reads like a winner for Andrea's contest..Thanks for stopping by..This ones expresses what so many feel deep inside when life is stressful...Sara
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Date: 2/13/2013 8:55:00 AM
wow!! very nice poem from you friend Russell :) Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 2/13/2013 8:20:00 AM
lovely write here, Russell
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Date: 2/13/2013 7:46:00 AM
A beautiful poem Russel. You have no idea of how man tears I have cried like that. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 2/12/2013 9:27:00 PM
Russell, I'm glad to see you how you pulled off Andrea's new contest theme. I gave it a shot this morning.:-( I've decided 2 try again on Friday. A very sad image. And still your poem is of deep beauty. good luck in the contest.PD
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