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She Bathes

. From the well the soft water she pours on mine flesh slowly I feel the cool And her warm hands ‘pon my flesh awash with glycerin cause the thrust of words my plea please Yesss our flesh caused slide and tender feel until the rupture of love caused sleep on dry leaf

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/23/2015 1:20:00 PM
This flows with elegantly expressed sensuality. A delightful read. // paul
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Date: 9/5/2011 5:16:00 AM
So sensuous this bathing. I feel the emotion and tender touch!
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:54:00 PM
James you painted a brilliant picture with this one...such a joy to read.....smiles....chiquita
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Date: 8/1/2011 12:09:00 AM
I love this poem James.
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:32:00 AM
enjoyed the moment....phew!!
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:28:00 AM
I just love it when you allow the reader to paint his or her own picture with the words you use James.. Really enjoyed this gem of yours.. Enjoy the rest of your week ;-) lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/27/2011 8:08:00 AM
Nicely done, words spoken elegantly
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Date: 7/26/2011 9:54:00 PM
Very cool and FRESH!!! Dry leaf reminded me of Adam and Eve!!
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Date: 7/26/2011 2:55:00 PM
hey james, very sensual, flows well, David
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Date: 7/26/2011 2:39:00 PM
such a warm tone of sensuality here, james.. i bathe in your graceful lines! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 7/26/2011 2:38:00 PM
well.. another wow wonder as I refer to those dynamic poems that infuse dynamite in lines of passion and exotic emotions.... feeling each line embracing the erotica James.. superb...luv..
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Date: 7/26/2011 1:27:00 PM
Hope you are having a wonderful week James. I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2011 12:01:00 PM
A rather rustic setting, Sir James. At least I feel outdoorsy with it. Breezy, kind of. It splashes deliciously. Love, daver
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