Shark Tale

shark tale


I once enjoyed a movie on a shark.
His bite much bigger than a dogs bark.
In the ocean JAWS scared more than fish.
A bite so deep no one could stitch.
With teeth so sharp, always leaving a mark..


      
  S.K.A.T. POETRY

FIRST LIMERICK EVER ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/18/2016 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured with this Limerick....it sure has bite YNR : )
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Date: 8/18/2016 10:58:00 AM
My most intimidating Nemesis. Exciting thrilling movie that kept me away from large bodies of water until I was the age of 16. Such a short poem to give me chills nice write SKAT
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Date: 8/15/2016 11:11:00 PM
Neat little limerick! Like it!
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Date: 8/25/2015 11:47:00 PM
Skat, back here at your FIRST limerick ever and to ask you a question. When you say the wind poem can't have won a contest in the past , do you mean anybody's contest? Or specifically yours? I think I have one that maybe only got an HM but I want to make sure of your rule if I should enter it or not. I am sure it was not in your contest. Hope you will let me know. thanks, Andrea
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Date: 8/6/2015 6:52:00 PM
gosh, you may not have even been born yet in the late 70's. hahaha Time went REALLY fast for me.
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Date: 8/6/2015 6:51:00 PM
reading this one again and enjoying it! Sure miss those days when movies like Jaws ruled the movie houses!! Was that before your day, Skat? It was 70's I think. well, you did not answer my question, but don't worry . I wrote of both the sun and the sunset, just to be on the safe side. haha! .
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Date: 5/4/2015 1:54:00 PM
Interesting poem
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Date: 2/8/2015 8:16:00 PM
Hello SKAT, your poem was simply cute. Good work. Huggs*
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Date: 1/28/2014 10:56:00 PM
SKAT what a cute and silly poem. It leaves an "impression" of humor for the reader. Makes me smile. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Singing Soprano poem.
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Date: 7/7/2013 12:21:00 AM
no!
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Date: 10/15/2010 10:30:00 AM
Limericks my fav. you have it girl this is good.
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Date: 9/2/2010 9:21:00 PM
just looking back on this limerick, S.K.A.T, enjoyed, Harry
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Date: 8/21/2010 10:19:00 AM
Hey S.K.A.T.: How's it going? Great poem!!! It reminds me (in a way) of 2 of my poems. Peace: Sheol PS: thank you 4 reading andcommenting on my poem.
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Date: 5/5/2010 7:36:00 AM
You did well with this first Limerick! Enjoyed reading it today, Irma!..Gert
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:30:00 PM
ha ha good 2 b ur first... by of course me u know who, belinda
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:10:00 AM
I think you did very well, for a first try, I find this form very difficult, so bravo.. and thanks for your comment on my unfinished poem (ha ha ).. it is done now.. if you care to have a peak... Constance
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Date: 3/10/2010 7:01:00 PM
I would like to say thanks to all, on my comments for shark tale...
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Date: 3/7/2010 10:32:00 PM
well, that last line is a whale of an understatement. hahaha. Irma, you did quite well for your first limerick ever. I enjoyed it. I saw you left me a soupmail. I am in a rush but promise to answer it ether tonight or tomorrow. LUv ya, Andrea
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Date: 3/3/2010 1:37:00 PM
Not bad for your first try, the syllable count is a bit off but other than that you have done a fine job with the rhyme. Thank you for sharing the shark tale. Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 2/26/2010 12:27:00 PM
Been reading so many Limerick poems today just had to come back and read yours again too... this new contest has sparked all the poets to write Limericks today.. hope u have entered this one ... luv.. your BBF Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/25/2010 8:26:00 PM
And you did okay, my dear. Just tighten up a bit on the syllable count and you 'll be fine. Everyone starts somewhere and you took the first big step! Congratulatios! Stay with it! There are three P's in Perfection: Practice, Patience and Perserverance. Keep those in mind and you're on your way! Good luck. Thanks for your kind remark. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 2/25/2010 5:22:00 PM
Good job... creative... i liked this limerick... it was awesome:)
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Date: 2/25/2010 8:33:00 AM
And you did a wonderful job my friend....:JP]
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Date: 2/25/2010 8:25:00 AM
Looks great to me!! Good luck in Carolyn's contest!! :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 2/25/2010 6:02:00 AM
Thankxxx Irma for your kind comments on my poetry .. just luv this one ... should be a sure winner for u.. I did change my entry ..had more time to think about it ..so glad u liked it.. appreciate your encouraging words.. thankxx my dear friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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