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Shadow in the Sky

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Shadow in the Sky

As my body lay
Footstep have long faded
Where am I
I don't see my family and friends that were on earth
But I see the onces who have past

The event was clouded over by protest
Protest are intrusion of light
It was so soft like cotton
White like white-out
Beautiful as a mockingbird

Finally realize I'm die
My family telling me you are going be okay
But what was so bad about it
I didn't missed my family who was left behind
Now I'm just another
Shadow in the Shy

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  1. Date: 1/24/2010 10:00:00 AM
    This is your stlye so keep it! A cool read and enjoy your Sunday.:)

  1. Date: 1/24/2010 12:25:00 AM
    Interesting poem. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 1/23/2010 11:24:00 PM
    wow i love this one its beautiful...nikki