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Shadow

I saw her from my window, With her eyes filled with sorrow, She was swayed by the wind blow, And was cold by the falling snow… I’d looked at her for an hour, Her face so sad and looks bothered, But sometimes I don’t know her, Or how to make her feels better… I went outside and stand behind her back, There are so many things I wanted to ask, She turned on me but then I was shocked, She made me totally blocked... I'm freeze and began to cry, How could it be, please tell me why? The girl who standing in front of me, Is just a shadow inside of me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/15/2016 7:36:00 PM
AXIS, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 1/7/2011 6:53:00 PM
well written....enjoyed
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