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Serving Those Who Crave

. Gifted souls with tender touch and morning dew Slumped forward with pen and slip eager to share what God to us did bless Rhyming and flowing serving those who crave the passion and desire of the poets mind A sip of the goblet and an extra word to keep the hearts of the excited in burn

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Daver Austin

Date: 9/12/2011 4:58:00 PM

Yes, "a loaf of bread, cheese, jug of wine, and thee." Something like that. We could substitute pen and paper for the cheese, but never the wine. You do have the "tender touch. Love, daver

M.I.A .

Date: 8/23/2011 2:49:00 AM

that 'morning dew' part is simply lovely. in burn James, always that, our soul ~.~

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/21/2011 8:33:00 PM

Hi dear James, I love picking the poet's minds on the site, we do have such fun! Your verse reminds me how lucky we are to have each other. Enjoyed!

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/19/2011 4:13:00 PM

I just love how you come up with these gems James ;) lovely piece you have here.. Hope yourself and Noah will have a great weekend ;) love Wilma

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/18/2011 9:04:00 PM

Wonderful write mate, I love it....with love...old Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/18/2011 1:32:00 AM

I love it all james.. the rhyme flow... and all.. new is exciting ... take care..linda

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/17/2011 9:52:00 PM

Hi James, I'm back and sent you a soup mail.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/17/2011 7:21:00 AM

enjoyed reading your work today....thanks for your comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2011 12:30:00 AM

thanks for your lovely comments today, James. I will see if I can find an older poem of yours to read !

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2011 6:47:00 PM

well James so happy u enjoyed my Tyburn.. lately we poets have been learning lots of new forms.. hope all is well with u dear friend .. and Noah too.. need some luv lines to stir my juices luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2011 7:35:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Truth is penned...Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/12/2011 5:06:00 PM

Lovely James, a gentle verse that gives such a nice hug. Soup mail for you.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/12/2011 4:50:00 PM

James, this is great..luv the spirit and expression in all of your poems.... a true talent....thanks so much for your comments they are much appreciated....smiles....Chiquita B.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/11/2011 4:24:00 PM

i must say, this is incredible, james!.. it has to have a part 2.. wow, the true spirit lives in you.. :) huggs, nette

James Foulk

Date: 8/10/2011 2:34:00 PM

you are such a gifted poet, and this piece of wonderful poetry shows just that. thank you for commenting on A Dusty Road Have I Walked.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/10/2011 1:53:00 AM

Ah this is beautiful, and so true, James :) really enjoyed reading this :) thank you for all your kind words in mine :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2011 11:38:00 PM

VERY nice, Mr. Poet!!! Great title for it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/9/2011 10:02:00 PM

Oh, I'd like to step inside your mind and see where your creativity originates, James. Perhaps I need a "sip of the goblet" to write like this! Excellent, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/9/2011 7:36:00 PM

Awsome write mate I love it...with love old Jack

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/9/2011 6:49:00 PM

Me like!! More more!! Thanks for your visits to my cyberwrites!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/9/2011 3:20:00 PM

constantly creative is the poets mantra James and the expressions of this piece radiate luv.. poetry is passion and desire ..and lots of emotion too.. an enjoyable delight my friend.. fresh view on writers from a superb writer..oh..