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Serving Those Who Crave

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               Gifted souls with tender touch
                        and morning dew

           Slumped forward with pen and slip
              eager to share what God to us
                             did bless

                     Rhyming and flowing
                  serving those who crave
                    the passion and desire
                       of the poets mind

                      A sip of the goblet
                      and an extra word
                      to keep the hearts 
                         of the excited

                              in burn

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Daver Austin Date: 9/12/2011 4:58:00 PM Yes, "a loaf of bread, cheese, jug of wine, and thee." Something like that. We could substitute pen and paper for the cheese, but never the wine. You do have the "tender touch. Love, daver Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 8/23/2011 2:49:00 AM that 'morning dew' part is simply lovely. in burn James, always that, our soul ~.~ Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 8/21/2011 8:33:00 PM Hi dear James, I love picking the poet's minds on the site, we do have such fun! Your verse reminds me how lucky we are to have each other. Enjoyed! Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 8/19/2011 4:13:00 PM I just love how you come up with these gems James ;) lovely piece you have here.. Hope yourself and Noah will have a great weekend ;) love Wilma Login to Reply

Jack Ross Jr. Date: 8/18/2011 9:04:00 PM Wonderful write mate, I love it....with love...old Jack Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/18/2011 1:32:00 AM I love it all james.. the rhyme flow... and all.. new is exciting ... take care..linda Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 8/17/2011 9:52:00 PM Hi James, I'm back and sent you a soup mail. Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 8/17/2011 7:21:00 AM enjoyed reading your work today....thanks for your comments. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/17/2011 12:30:00 AM thanks for your lovely comments today, James. I will see if I can find an older poem of yours to read ! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/16/2011 6:47:00 PM well James so happy u enjoyed my Tyburn.. lately we poets have been learning lots of new forms.. hope all is well with u dear friend .. and Noah too.. need some luv lines to stir my juices luv.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/12/2011 7:35:00 PM Enjoyed reading your work..Truth is penned...Sara Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 8/12/2011 5:06:00 PM Lovely James, a gentle verse that gives such a nice hug. Soup mail for you. Login to Reply

Chiquitachiamaka Baity Date: 8/12/2011 4:50:00 PM James, this is great..luv the spirit and expression in all of your poems.... a true talent....thanks so much for your comments they are much appreciated....smiles....Chiquita B. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/11/2011 4:24:00 PM i must say, this is incredible, james!.. it has to have a part 2.. wow, the true spirit lives in you.. :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 8/10/2011 2:34:00 PM you are such a gifted poet, and this piece of wonderful poetry shows just that. thank you for commenting on A Dusty Road Have I Walked. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 8/10/2011 1:53:00 AM Ah this is beautiful, and so true, James :) really enjoyed reading this :) thank you for all your kind words in mine :D Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/9/2011 11:38:00 PM VERY nice, Mr. Poet!!! Great title for it. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/9/2011 10:02:00 PM Oh, I'd like to step inside your mind and see where your creativity originates, James. Perhaps I need a "sip of the goblet" to write like this! Excellent, dear friend. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Jack Ross Jr. Date: 8/9/2011 7:36:00 PM Awsome write mate I love it...with love old Jack Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 8/9/2011 6:49:00 PM Me like!! More more!! Thanks for your visits to my cyberwrites! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/9/2011 3:20:00 PM constantly creative is the poets mantra James and the expressions of this piece radiate luv.. poetry is passion and desire ..and lots of emotion too.. an enjoyable delight my friend.. fresh view on writers from a superb writer..oh.. Login to Reply